View to Tomorrow
From this vantage point...30 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, View to Tomorrow, has the proper formatting and reminds us that we literally can exist in the past and future if we we know how to PRESENT ourselves.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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This cinquain, View to Tomorrow, has the proper formatting and reminds us that we literally can exist in the past and future if we we know how to PRESENT ourselves.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thanx for the review on this one, Bill. :)
Comment from tfawcus
The midnight hour seems to feature strongly in the imagination of poets, being - as it is - on the cusp between the old day and the new. You capture something of the essence of that in this poem about looking, like Janus, both backwards and forwards.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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The midnight hour seems to feature strongly in the imagination of poets, being - as it is - on the cusp between the old day and the new. You capture something of the essence of that in this poem about looking, like Janus, both backwards and forwards.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Tony -- I do always enjoy and appreciate hearing from you, sir! ;) ;) Hope this finds you gearing up for an awesome weekend -- take care! :) :) Yvette
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Same to you, Yvette.
We're enjoying perfect autumn weather at the moment, so I imagine that it will be a gardening weekend!
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Hooray for gardening! :) My husband has been trying to put down a few new beds while it's my job to get the old ones in shape!! :) :) Enjoy the outdoors, sir! :) Yvette
Comment from royowen
Midnight, in a sense the dawning of either new life, or eternal nothingness, as the eleventh hour saints sent into the fields earned the same as those that bore the heat of the day. God is merciful to all who ask. A beautifully writte cinquain Yvette, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Midnight, in a sense the dawning of either new life, or eternal nothingness, as the eleventh hour saints sent into the fields earned the same as those that bore the heat of the day. God is merciful to all who ask. A beautifully writte cinquain Yvette, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Roy -- the crazy blonde was waxing philosophical I suppose... LOL! ;) :) Thank you for those awesome reflections, sir! ;) ;) Yvette
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You're clever dear girl
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking
5-7-5 about that sudden moment of transcendence that seldom comes--but is so
riveting and clear when it comes.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking
5-7-5 about that sudden moment of transcendence that seldom comes--but is so
riveting and clear when it comes.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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The fact that I provoked your thoughts, Janice, means that my work here is done! :) :) LOL! LOL! :) ;) I do so appreciate your review and lovely comments, ma'am -- take care out there and have a great weekend! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Yvette,
Thank you for sharing your lovely cinquain for the contest. I love the thought of looking at the future when we gaze at the dawn. I never thought of it that way, but now, I will never think of it differently,
~MP~
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi, Yvette,
Thank you for sharing your lovely cinquain for the contest. I love the thought of looking at the future when we gaze at the dawn. I never thought of it that way, but now, I will never think of it differently,
~MP~
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hooray - a new way of looking at things....as we get older that's always a welcome thing!! :) :) So glad that, even though small, this was your discovery for the day! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in, MP -- take good care! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Yes, we have all been to the 'edge' at moments in our lives. The question is do we seize that moment or not.
Your entry poem was a delightful opening for this day. Your dark background was a perfect match for your midnight nexus.
Mark
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Yvette,
Yes, we have all been to the 'edge' at moments in our lives. The question is do we seize that moment or not.
Your entry poem was a delightful opening for this day. Your dark background was a perfect match for your midnight nexus.
Mark
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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So glad this started your morning off on the right foot, Mark-- glad to know it was good for your smile, sir!! :) :) I do appreciate your review and lovely comments -- take care out there! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Yvon
A different view that I would look at but we all have our opinions of the mid of night. I liked the third line best but the fifth I will have to pass. But anything is possible in this world.
(the future)- ( your Spirit)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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A different view that I would look at but we all have our opinions of the mid of night. I liked the third line best but the fifth I will have to pass. But anything is possible in this world.
(the future)- ( your Spirit)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review on this one, Yvon -- so glad you stopped by this evening!! ;) :) Your comments, as always, leave food for thought -- thanx, sir! :) :) Be sure to have a wonderful weekend ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
Never thought of it that way. After that first moment, the future becomes now. Interesting thought. Beautiful presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Never thought of it that way. After that first moment, the future becomes now. Interesting thought. Beautiful presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this, Yvonne! :) Of course, I had fun with it...you know with the whole crazy blonde blurring the lines between fantasy and reality...LOL! :) ;) Thanx for stopping by! :) Take good care out there and have good evening! ;) Yvette
Comment from Debra White
Hi Yvette :)
This is very clever - I never thought of midnight in this way before, but you are so right!
Beautifully presented and in perfect syllable count. I love your cinquain :)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hi Yvette :)
This is very clever - I never thought of midnight in this way before, but you are so right!
Beautifully presented and in perfect syllable count. I love your cinquain :)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hooray -- someone else that enjoys my crazy blurring of the lines between that thought of fantasy and true reality!! ;) ;) Thanx so much for your review on this one, Debra -- you are awesome! :) ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week! :);) Yvette
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvette, this is very good, and a great entry for the contest. You are so right about midnight being the precipice of the night and the when the new morning begin. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hi Yvette, this is very good, and a great entry for the contest. You are so right about midnight being the precipice of the night and the when the new morning begin. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Oh, Ulla -- thanx so much for popping in on this one -- glad you enjoyed it, ma'am! :) ;) I miss reading about your life travels...so I need to catch up once school's out! :) Thanx again and have a wonderful remainder of the week! ;) ;)
