What Time is It...
Season... Lunar... Greenwich...22 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable in your one-liner
about time. We are so preoccupied with time--knowing exactly
what time it is all the time--yet we lose track of it and often misuse
it!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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You have made effective use of every syllable in your one-liner
about time. We are so preoccupied with time--knowing exactly
what time it is all the time--yet we lose track of it and often misuse
it!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you for reading
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, time takes time to learn new tricks and skills.
Your selected illustration and short verse are definitely in sync. Glad your interesting timepiece is run on solar energy not worn out batteries ... LOL
Good luck in this contest!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Yes, time takes time to learn new tricks and skills.
Your selected illustration and short verse are definitely in sync. Glad your interesting timepiece is run on solar energy not worn out batteries ... LOL
Good luck in this contest!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you for reading
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, I like this Monostich poem you have written. Time... it is quite the concept isn't it? If it were up to me, we'd have day, and we'd have night. The seasons can be kept, they're fairly relative... but all of this exact time stuff... down to the second... I mean, what does it really mean? What does it really matter for... unless you have something in the oven? You wake up, you work all day, you go home, have dinner, do whatever for a couple of hours and go to bed until you wake up and do it all again. They did it before clocks... why do we need them so badly now I ask you??? :)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hello Author, I like this Monostich poem you have written. Time... it is quite the concept isn't it? If it were up to me, we'd have day, and we'd have night. The seasons can be kept, they're fairly relative... but all of this exact time stuff... down to the second... I mean, what does it really mean? What does it really matter for... unless you have something in the oven? You wake up, you work all day, you go home, have dinner, do whatever for a couple of hours and go to bed until you wake up and do it all again. They did it before clocks... why do we need them so badly now I ask you??? :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you for reading
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Monostich poem about the essence of time, although, we all use time in our lives we do not understand where it is coming from or where it may go.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Monostich poem about the essence of time, although, we all use time in our lives we do not understand where it is coming from or where it may go.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you for reading
Comment from Yvon
Sorry no sixers left. If anything was truer I don't know. Everyone can tell time. Most know it can be cut up into units. It is also a measurement when long distances are involved. But what actually is it?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Sorry no sixers left. If anything was truer I don't know. Everyone can tell time. Most know it can be cut up into units. It is also a measurement when long distances are involved. But what actually is it?
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is was just fun to write and dress up with the right art... thank you, thank you for reading
Comment from LisaMay
You have pointed out in your poem how hard it is to really understand time. It is an abstract concept but people try to pin it down to measurable segments of seconds, minutes, hours.... but then when we measure time in light years we can see how our minds have to bend to get our heads around it. God does things in his own time, I always run out of time, it's time we all got along, it's time I went to bed... everything is personal and general so how can we truly understand time?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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You have pointed out in your poem how hard it is to really understand time. It is an abstract concept but people try to pin it down to measurable segments of seconds, minutes, hours.... but then when we measure time in light years we can see how our minds have to bend to get our heads around it. God does things in his own time, I always run out of time, it's time we all got along, it's time I went to bed... everything is personal and general so how can we truly understand time?
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... it was fun to write... yours, diana
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Oooh - This is an exceptional monostich and a superb entry. Can we presume you have an understanding of physics?
Best of luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Oooh - This is an exceptional monostich and a superb entry. Can we presume you have an understanding of physics?
Best of luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... it was fun to write... yours, diana
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. Though it was only one line, it was very effective in expressing a thought and philosophical moment. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This was a good write. Though it was only one line, it was very effective in expressing a thought and philosophical moment. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... it was fun to write... yours, diana
Comment from RodG
Your title and poem make it very clear that most of us only THINK we understand time. Try to explain time--i.e.--history to a five-year-old who has no concept of "centuries, " much less B.C. and A.D.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Your title and poem make it very clear that most of us only THINK we understand time. Try to explain time--i.e.--history to a five-year-old who has no concept of "centuries, " much less B.C. and A.D.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... it was fun to write... yours, diana
Comment from QC Poet
Deep profound extremely intense thought provoking and beautiful picturesque messaging work with great descriptive words choices. Gonna be hard to top, Congrats and like to see more of this type of poetic creations.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Deep profound extremely intense thought provoking and beautiful picturesque messaging work with great descriptive words choices. Gonna be hard to top, Congrats and like to see more of this type of poetic creations.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thanks for such a celestial review... much gratitude to you... it was fun to write... yours, diana
