Comment from KatyM

Excellent

Great chapter! Very intense. I do have a question though...who is Lana? Somehow I missed who she is and she isn't listed in the character names. So is Rachel going to get fussed at for not listening about staying clear? lol
This isn't the end is it? sniff sniff....I would be sad if it was!


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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019

Thank you so much for your great review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, this is the end, for now. Until those cold brown eyes decides to do more than watch.
Lana is Hernanzed's daughter. She said Daddy told me where to find you.... That is to general, so I added That's typical of Hernandez, sending his daughter to do his work and I added her to the character list. Thanks for catching that.
How did you're interview go? I hope good.
Thank you so much for all your help, support and friendship, take care.

reply by KatyM on 13-Mar-2019

Ok good that I could help. Well, had a phone interview today for a week long sub job. You would think it was a permanent position with all the stupid questions! lol Good news is I got recertified officially today! I just happened to go on the website to check and there it was! WOOT WOOT...I am going to go observe on Monday morning. So we will see.

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019

Congratulations. I'm sure you'll do just fine.