By pity
a kind of humoristic story with animal4 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
LOL! Now, why would a marsupial do anything other than cause a downpour? I can't imagine trying to catch one of these creatures. Like an overgrown rabbit on steroids. Love the waterloo line!
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LOL! Now, why would a marsupial do anything other than cause a downpour? I can't imagine trying to catch one of these creatures. Like an overgrown rabbit on steroids. Love the waterloo line!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
Comment from Mark D. R.
Funny verse and no illustration is necessary.
Not many poems will place together wapiti, loo, and waterloo (I'd capitalize this since it really is a proper name). You amused as all with their inclusion.
Suggestion: consider eliminating caps in some of you lines because your verse-sentences have periods.
Hopefully other FS reviewers will find this funny too!
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Funny verse and no illustration is necessary.
Not many poems will place together wapiti, loo, and waterloo (I'd capitalize this since it really is a proper name). You amused as all with their inclusion.
Suggestion: consider eliminating caps in some of you lines because your verse-sentences have periods.
Hopefully other FS reviewers will find this funny too!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
Comment from Vicki Ziemer
I have to admit that I really didn't get what the first few lines of the poem meant, but at the end of the poem, I was laughing. " as the warder of the zoo, I could not go to the Loo" That sounds disastrous.
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I have to admit that I really didn't get what the first few lines of the poem meant, but at the end of the poem, I was laughing. " as the warder of the zoo, I could not go to the Loo" That sounds disastrous.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
I wish you'd selected a picture of a wapiti. I have not a clue what it looks like.
It truly would be meeting your Waterloo if you couldn't go to the loo...lol
Ran with my pumps? High heeled shoes??
God bless
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I wish you'd selected a picture of a wapiti. I have not a clue what it looks like.
It truly would be meeting your Waterloo if you couldn't go to the loo...lol
Ran with my pumps? High heeled shoes??
God bless
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
