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"Amazing!" #1. 2019

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Transcending Transparency"
New Book of Poetry.

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A beautiful write dedicated to the beginning of a family -- really was moved by your line of "Five, Crystal, Hearts all on one Single, Silvery, String".... thank you for sharing that warmth this morning! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    Thanks Yvette and have a Blessed Day
    Dr. Ricky
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Comment from Maria Millsaps
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Interesting reading. I just couldn't see the connection between the birth of the child and the transcending transparency, or the birth of the child born with a birth defect.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
    The child that was born with the cord wrapped around her neck?
    That's my daughter Dana.
    She had not a defect.
    You assumed.
    And because I knew it?
    She is now today 34 years old. Also, you just read the first part.
    And, there will be a continuation.
    To bring it all to a head...
    Which involves the birth of my son Jason.
    Dr.Ricky
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