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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Transcending Transparency"
New Book of Poetry.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Y. M. Roger
A beautiful write dedicated to the beginning of a family -- really was moved by your line of "Five, Crystal, Hearts all on one Single, Silvery, String".... thank you for sharing that warmth this morning! :) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
Thanks Yvette and have a Blessed Day
Dr. Ricky
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Comment from
Maria Millsaps
Interesting reading. I just couldn't see the connection between the birth of the child and the transcending transparency, or the birth of the child born with a birth defect.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
The child that was born with the cord wrapped around her neck?
That's my daughter Dana.
She had not a defect.
You assumed.
And because I knew it?
She is now today 34 years old. Also, you just read the first part.
And, there will be a continuation.
To bring it all to a head...
Which involves the birth of my son Jason.
Dr.Ricky
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