Her Scarlet Lips
I thought I was special, but she's just using me.16 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Anyone who finds this suggestive or of poor taste has a dirty mind. It could ONLY have been a tissue. Tsk on them!! Another OUTSTANDING job by the FanStory Queen of Clever. Proud to say I know you, and best of luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Anyone who finds this suggestive or of poor taste has a dirty mind. It could ONLY have been a tissue. Tsk on them!! Another OUTSTANDING job by the FanStory Queen of Clever. Proud to say I know you, and best of luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Better to be Queen of Clever than Princess of Porn or Servant of Smut!
Thanks for reviewing and your good wishes.
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Oh, now LisaMay - since when do they have to be mutually exclusive?! xo
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True. Valid point.... I can be all of them!
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Yes! Always be more!
Comment from 24chas
I thought this was very creative and a good write. I wasn't sure what it was going to be until the end. Nice job in building the suspense. I don't think there was any degree of smuttiness at all. Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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I thought this was very creative and a good write. I wasn't sure what it was going to be until the end. Nice job in building the suspense. I don't think there was any degree of smuttiness at all. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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I'm pleased that I kept you guessing. Thanks for the reassuring review.
Comment from dmt1967
I found this story really entertaining as a short. I was a bit confused at first but soon realised it had to be an inanimate object lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Take care.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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I found this story really entertaining as a short. I was a bit confused at first but soon realised it had to be an inanimate object lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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I'm glad you got there in the end... I like messing with people for a while!
Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, you had me until the end Lisa! You lured me in and spat me out! I just loved it, these short flash fiction fixes are idea, best of luck with the contest, this is my favourite! Love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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He he he, you had me until the end Lisa! You lured me in and spat me out! I just loved it, these short flash fiction fixes are idea, best of luck with the contest, this is my favourite! Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Ah, it's early days yet... the entries I have seen are all very creative and different... thank you for your supportive comments.
Comment from Scarbrems
Ha ha, this is brilliant. I never would have guessed a tissue, but when I realised, I was, 'oh yeah, right'. Very clever, and yes it is a mite suggestive, but it certainly doesn't cross the bounds of taste. Great story, well done.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Ha ha, this is brilliant. I never would have guessed a tissue, but when I realised, I was, 'oh yeah, right'. Very clever, and yes it is a mite suggestive, but it certainly doesn't cross the bounds of taste. Great story, well done.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Oh how lovely and generous of you to give me a 6. And thanks for reassuring me about the 'bounds of taste'.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Excellent. I found the suggestive part captivating and am in awe of the surprising ending. The artwork is fitting and also protects the surprise ending. Good job!
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Excellent. I found the suggestive part captivating and am in awe of the surprising ending. The artwork is fitting and also protects the surprise ending. Good job!
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Hey thanks Lance! Your review is a relief to me... I am never sure what folks might take offence at.
