I Love You
A dependency where love has no control7 total reviews
Comment from Ballad man
A nicely written poem you have given us here, Poet watch. Such sadness is running through this person. The emotions spill out of your words so wonderfully. I enjoyed the read, my friend....Pete
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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A nicely written poem you have given us here, Poet watch. Such sadness is running through this person. The emotions spill out of your words so wonderfully. I enjoyed the read, my friend....Pete
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you Pete. Glad you felt it. I also liked your writings. :)
Comment from rspoet
Hello Writer,
You've written an excellent poem and entry for the contest
from a somewhat different point of view.
The ties that bind or cords that bind.
From the comfort of safety to the world of competition.
Excellent choice of art work and format
Not sure you meant Love, life, [lost] or Love, life, [lose]
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Hello Writer,
You've written an excellent poem and entry for the contest
from a somewhat different point of view.
The ties that bind or cords that bind.
From the comfort of safety to the world of competition.
Excellent choice of art work and format
Not sure you meant Love, life, [lost] or Love, life, [lose]
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Thank you Robert. I wrote this from the view of an infant in the womb. :) Something different. What you write about (lost or lose) has me thinking and I don't know which to choose. :) Thank you I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from kiwijenny
This love poem was intriguing..Mother made me think you being pushed away for your own good. Like a mother robin pushing fledglings out of the nest so they can fly
Great job
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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This love poem was intriguing..Mother made me think you being pushed away for your own good. Like a mother robin pushing fledglings out of the nest so they can fly
Great job
God bless
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Thank you, kiwijenny. I wrote this from the viewpoint of a child being born. :)
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Breaking away from Mother's apron strings into the big wide world is a challenge, hopefully Mothers are always there for us, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Breaking away from Mother's apron strings into the big wide world is a challenge, hopefully Mothers are always there for us, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Dolly I wrote this from the viewpoint of a child in mother's womb. A crazy write but no more dependency. :) ;)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, my goodness....what a very troubled soul.... your write is an awesome offering for this contest so loaded with emotions!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Oh, my goodness....what a very troubled soul.... your write is an awesome offering for this contest so loaded with emotions!! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Thanks Yvette. You read the dawn of a new life. It's like being born again. ;) :)
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very very good poem, I liked how simple it was, that made it so elegant in a way. The picture was beautiful and brought the whole poem together! :):):)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Very very good poem, I liked how simple it was, that made it so elegant in a way. The picture was beautiful and brought the whole poem together! :):):)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Thank you Randa. I'm glad you liked it. :) A child being born is an innocent soul.
Comment from sfharper
I wish so that the turn went to a positive relationship rather than one so sad, I like the turn to Mother. I enjoy the sweetness of the love and its bounty in the sky. Interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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I wish so that the turn went to a positive relationship rather than one so sad, I like the turn to Mother. I enjoy the sweetness of the love and its bounty in the sky. Interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Tank you sfharper. I'm glad you liked it, You saw the dawn of a new life.
