Tanka(pepper smiles)
A Tanka poem29 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
Due to my illness I missed so many of my fan lists writes.. I trying to catch up now even though some are very late.
I love the artwork you choose , it is a perfect match
your write truly touch my heart .. that is the cute's puppy I have seemed today ... How can one not love it?
I hope you get a chance to read my poems even though it's late.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Due to my illness I missed so many of my fan lists writes.. I trying to catch up now even though some are very late.
I love the artwork you choose , it is a perfect match
your write truly touch my heart .. that is the cute's puppy I have seemed today ... How can one not love it?
I hope you get a chance to read my poems even though it's late.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
Yorkshire terriers are so cute. You did a good job with your writing and your
painting. I can imagine this dog actually standing still for a picture.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Yorkshire terriers are so cute. You did a good job with your writing and your
painting. I can imagine this dog actually standing still for a picture.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you Joan for a wonderful review
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Any time, Pam.
~Joan
Comment from Yvon
This was pretty good. I was wondering though what type of camera takes pictures like that? Sorry to hear about your sisters hubby. Lot of people dropping to the big C. A few in my family.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This was pretty good. I was wondering though what type of camera takes pictures like that? Sorry to hear about your sisters hubby. Lot of people dropping to the big C. A few in my family.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Yvon. I painted Pepper from a photo of her that my sister took. So, she posed for the camera and then I painted from the photo. Thank you for your lovely review
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use every word in this concise, descriptive
poem. I have seen dogs and cats smile and pose for the camera--
so adorable! Good use of alliteration.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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You have made excellent use every word in this concise, descriptive
poem. I have seen dogs and cats smile and pose for the camera--
so adorable! Good use of alliteration.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you Janice for a truly lovely review. My cat poses for the camera
Comment from Mark D. R.
P-letter alliterations are peppered throughout your Tanka verse. Good job! Not absolutely sure if either or both terrier or yorkie should be capitalized. For some reason I think Yorkie should be. You did capitalize it in your notes.
Your text complements your painting.
Best wishes in this entry Pam!
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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P-letter alliterations are peppered throughout your Tanka verse. Good job! Not absolutely sure if either or both terrier or yorkie should be capitalized. For some reason I think Yorkie should be. You did capitalize it in your notes.
Your text complements your painting.
Best wishes in this entry Pam!
Mark
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi Mark. True, it is
Normally capitalized. But, capitalization is frowned upon in tankas only proper nouns should be capitalized. Thank you for a truly wonderful review
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Pepper Smiles, looks good and captures the friendly, family pooch in an oil painting that belies how still a yorkie can be.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This tanka, Pepper Smiles, looks good and captures the friendly, family pooch in an oil painting that belies how still a yorkie can be.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Lol, Bill. You crack me up. My sister took the photo. Pepper needed a walk. Can you tell? He he. Thank you for such a nice review
Comment from geetha silvaratnam
This dog surely means a lot to your sister. A very nice poem and wow, a very nice painting of Pepper too. Thanks for sharing. It was a good read. Have fun with Pepper. :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This dog surely means a lot to your sister. A very nice poem and wow, a very nice painting of Pepper too. Thanks for sharing. It was a good read. Have fun with Pepper. :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you geetha for a truly wonderful review
Comment from Pantygynt
I was watching the judging at Cruftd (the famous dog show) the other night and the commentator commented on several breeds that appeared to smile. My dea spaniel, Penny, always looks so worried but I don't think she is really.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I was watching the judging at Cruftd (the famous dog show) the other night and the commentator commented on several breeds that appeared to smile. My dea spaniel, Penny, always looks so worried but I don't think she is really.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Lol, Jim. My cat is always bright eyed. Pepper is so cute that we all spoil her. Thanks for the great review
Comment from susand3022
Hi Pam, Pepper has quite the silly little grin! Does he really look like that or is that a little bit exaggerated? His Tanka is sweet. I'm glad your sister likes her puppy, even though she didn't really like dogs. :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi Pam, Pepper has quite the silly little grin! Does he really look like that or is that a little bit exaggerated? His Tanka is sweet. I'm glad your sister likes her puppy, even though she didn't really like dogs. :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi
Susan. I did give each side of her lips an upward curve. Hehe. My sister loves the painting. Thank you for a truly lovely review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about Pepper the small Yorkshire Terrier which poses for a photo with a wide smile. A very beautiful painting of Pepper also to accompany your Tanka.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Tanka about Pepper the small Yorkshire Terrier which poses for a photo with a wide smile. A very beautiful painting of Pepper also to accompany your Tanka.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
