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Where Did Love Go

3 line poetry

6 total reviews 
Comment from 24chas
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In a heartbeat, Bucketlist. There's a very fine line between love and hate and this poem encapsulates those feelings very succinctly. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    A huge thank you for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is unfortunately what happens when divorce looms, those who were once in love now hate each other with the same passion, it is sad, but that's life, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    A huge thank you for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written three-line poem about the love relationship can quickly change when there is no respect and honesty which will lead to a definite divorce and a feeling of hate toward each other.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    A huge thank you for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Okay, I know it wasn't a funny poem, but that picture cracked me up! ;) :) But the poem so much plays out true life in so many cases...even those that claim to have a 'civil divorce' display flashes of those darker emotions... Great write, Trisha, and best of luck to you in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    A huge thank you for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Bucket,
.Ha ha ha! I love the image you have chosen. It is a perfect complement to your excellent contest entry poem. This should be a strong contender.

Best of luck and thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    A huge thank you for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mark D. R.
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very cute illustration accompanies your contest restricted verse

you surely describe a reality for some divorcing couples

what I like:
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... people who love
the satori-like last line

suggestions to ponder:
need for capitalization for such a short verse?

Mark Twain has a saying about using 'metropolis' for seven cents, while 'city' gets less. As such, 'mentioned' is fine and known by all, but a shorter length word such as 'cited' might include an extra legal connotation for your verse.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    A huge thank you for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha