Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Nutty Squirrel Club "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi GM. Your 5-7-5 certainly the describes the squirrels in my yard. Clever for sure. I admire the little buggers for their ingenuity. If there's a will, there's a way. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Hi GM. Your 5-7-5 certainly the describes the squirrels in my yard. Clever for sure. I admire the little buggers for their ingenuity. If there's a will, there's a way. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I recognize the good message about squirrels. However I don't find it witty. It doesn't capture the squirrel being nutty. There was no rhyme which would have drawn in the reader.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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I recognize the good message about squirrels. However I don't find it witty. It doesn't capture the squirrel being nutty. There was no rhyme which would have drawn in the reader.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and your time, rating system according to the instructions is mostly for grammatical errors and to correct structure of poems composure. I don't believe this contest requires a rhyming scheme.
Comment from Randa Dayle
Witty, Witty, Witty animal poem.... 5-7-5 great use of syllables. Those squirrels are underestimated intelligence but that they are very wise! Good job!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Witty, Witty, Witty animal poem.... 5-7-5 great use of syllables. Those squirrels are underestimated intelligence but that they are very wise! Good job!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
They are certainly very busy little guys .... and quite industrious!! :) :) A delightful 5-7-5 offering for this contest -- best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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They are certainly very busy little guys .... and quite industrious!! :) :) A delightful 5-7-5 offering for this contest -- best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a cute poem you have crafted for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest. I detest squirrels, but I do give them kudos for being intelligent and industrious. Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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This is a cute poem you have crafted for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest. I detest squirrels, but I do give them kudos for being intelligent and industrious. Good luck.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this clever, creative 5-7-5
about a smart, resourceful little critter that has its OWN day: January 21 was
National Squirrel Day!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this clever, creative 5-7-5
about a smart, resourceful little critter that has its OWN day: January 21 was
National Squirrel Day!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments. Also for that interesting information.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
I learned something...didn't realize squirrels were so clever! If I were a squirrel trying to promote membership in a self help club for my own kind, I would use your poem as the club's motto. A cute poem!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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I learned something...didn't realize squirrels were so clever! If I were a squirrel trying to promote membership in a self help club for my own kind, I would use your poem as the club's motto. A cute poem!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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I read the article in the notes, but it's still debated by some. It was my nephew's and friends moniker.
Thank you for the review and compliments,
