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Comment from Miss Sherry
Your work is always fascinating. This acrostic is so well done and I wish you good luck in the contest. You have a deep faith that always shows up no matter what you write. As far as I can see you have followed the requirements perfectly, and I am sure God is pleased with your results.
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Your work is always fascinating. This acrostic is so well done and I wish you good luck in the contest. You have a deep faith that always shows up no matter what you write. As far as I can see you have followed the requirements perfectly, and I am sure God is pleased with your results.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Acrostic Poem In Rhymes - It's a marvelous piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting all the required norms, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive, matching the theme phraseology, and an elegant style helping us measure the poem's remarkable depth.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
These lines, and the use of word 'smart' having different meanings, are particularly noteworthy:
"Let us make lionheart smart
In living human smart
Voice our rights to live free you please
Equip us live as you wish"
Superb!
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Best of Luck!!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Acrostic Poem In Rhymes - It's a marvelous piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting all the required norms, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive, matching the theme phraseology, and an elegant style helping us measure the poem's remarkable depth.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
These lines, and the use of word 'smart' having different meanings, are particularly noteworthy:
"Let us make lionheart smart
In living human smart
Voice our rights to live free you please
Equip us live as you wish"
Superb!
&
Best of Luck!!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from Raul1
I like how you put serious issues in your poem. Yes, we all look like an entire family, but aren't. I think that the idea is to do right by good people. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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I like how you put serious issues in your poem. Yes, we all look like an entire family, but aren't. I think that the idea is to do right by good people. I like this poem. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from QC Poet
Interesting rhyming prayer offering, more prayer than rhyme scheme. Acrostic is strong and apparent. Good Luck in the contest and Thanks for Sharing.
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Interesting rhyming prayer offering, more prayer than rhyme scheme. Acrostic is strong and apparent. Good Luck in the contest and Thanks for Sharing.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another of your unique writes, sir -- your title/acrostic words are ones I've not heard in a while but they are certainly welcome these days! ;) :) Have to say, your use of the word 'liver' through me off at first, but it works! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
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Another of your unique writes, sir -- your title/acrostic words are ones I've not heard in a while but they are certainly welcome these days! ;) :) Have to say, your use of the word 'liver' through me off at first, but it works! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, Magnificent rhyming acrostic. I liked the picture, May I ask how you get one from the Internet? I enjoyed your rhymes, your words about grace and humanity. Good luck in the contest! Dove
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Dear Alcreator, Magnificent rhyming acrostic. I liked the picture, May I ask how you get one from the Internet? I enjoyed your rhymes, your words about grace and humanity. Good luck in the contest! Dove
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
