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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
If only that could happen, what a wonderful world this would be. But, we are always going to get the evil ones, sent from hell to reign terror on the innocents. But, just the thought of how good life would be.... Your acrostic poem is an excellent contest entry and I wish you the best of luck. :) Sandra xx
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If only that could happen, what a wonderful world this would be. But, we are always going to get the evil ones, sent from hell to reign terror on the innocents. But, just the thought of how good life would be.... Your acrostic poem is an excellent contest entry and I wish you the best of luck. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
I like the fragmented feel of your poem and also the repeated use of the magnificent word lionheart.
It is very beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing.
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I like the fragmented feel of your poem and also the repeated use of the magnificent word lionheart.
It is very beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem. When we serve God we can only serve Him and His doctrine. When we start to honor man above God we are on the wrong path. There is only one God and one Faith.
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A very well-written acrostic poem. When we serve God we can only serve Him and His doctrine. When we start to honor man above God we are on the wrong path. There is only one God and one Faith.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from forestport12
My favorite form of poetry. Love how you chose Lion Heart and made it work. You made it work so that all the lines meshed and stayed on theme without feeling forced. You made it look effortless when it really isn't. Blessings ahead!
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My favorite form of poetry. Love how you chose Lion Heart and made it work. You made it work so that all the lines meshed and stayed on theme without feeling forced. You made it look effortless when it really isn't. Blessings ahead!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: great acrostic honoring God. I like sharing humanity
with each other and not in terror. God gives us great grace.
I agree that we are temporary here with a mission of love.
God bless. flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: great acrostic honoring God. I like sharing humanity
with each other and not in terror. God gives us great grace.
I agree that we are temporary here with a mission of love.
God bless. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from 24chas
This was a very nice prayer and acrostic, Alcreator. The flow was nice and this kind of piece is meant to be read aloud. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
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This was a very nice prayer and acrostic, Alcreator. The flow was nice and this kind of piece is meant to be read aloud. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from Dean Kuch
No matter where we hail from or what religious preferences we might adhere to, we are all God's children.
As human beings we are imperfect creatures.
We all have a heart that beats with passion in our chests.
We all cry salty, clear tears and bleed red, if cut.
We all have something we're very passionate about, be it our writing or our faith, or both.
Whatever our ethnicity, we are more alike than different and we all must share this big, blue wonderful world God created for us to live in.
Differences should be embraced, not shunned.
The fires of hatred can be doused by the water which gushed from the wounded side of Christ, Himself.
Good writing, Doc.
May you fare well in this contest.
~Dean
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No matter where we hail from or what religious preferences we might adhere to, we are all God's children.
As human beings we are imperfect creatures.
We all have a heart that beats with passion in our chests.
We all cry salty, clear tears and bleed red, if cut.
We all have something we're very passionate about, be it our writing or our faith, or both.
Whatever our ethnicity, we are more alike than different and we all must share this big, blue wonderful world God created for us to live in.
Differences should be embraced, not shunned.
The fires of hatred can be doused by the water which gushed from the wounded side of Christ, Himself.
Good writing, Doc.
May you fare well in this contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Interesting. You do like the Acrostic. I do also. Not sure I am up to a rhyming acrostic, but may give it a try if my funds are there. This is interesting with the lionheart beat with. I am interested if English is your first language? Your word use is very unusual and I tend to like it, but would be interested in knowing if it is your first language. The last line . . . will we ever be able to see a world for our children such as this? I only hope so. I have my doubts. This is a uniquely different creative piece and I like it.
Wendy
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Interesting. You do like the Acrostic. I do also. Not sure I am up to a rhyming acrostic, but may give it a try if my funds are there. This is interesting with the lionheart beat with. I am interested if English is your first language? Your word use is very unusual and I tend to like it, but would be interested in knowing if it is your first language. The last line . . . will we ever be able to see a world for our children such as this? I only hope so. I have my doubts. This is a uniquely different creative piece and I like it.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from Mastery
Hi auhor. You have done a good job on this acrostic:
"Let humanity be our religion
Inhumanity, cruelty free be every man
Only make us manly righteous livers
Never allow us spare crime mongers"
However, some of your lines are not rhyming, just so you know.
Blessings and good luck in the contest. Bob
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Hi auhor. You have done a good job on this acrostic:
"Let humanity be our religion
Inhumanity, cruelty free be every man
Only make us manly righteous livers
Never allow us spare crime mongers"
However, some of your lines are not rhyming, just so you know.
Blessings and good luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
Comment from meeshu
a gloried plea for salvation. let Earth be as it is in Heaven. not wasted words, oh no, for the die are cast. the day is near, when this shall be. for it has been written.........................meeshu
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a gloried plea for salvation. let Earth be as it is in Heaven. not wasted words, oh no, for the die are cast. the day is near, when this shall be. for it has been written.........................meeshu
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
