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Comment from karenina
You do very well with this Acrostic form! Your final line says it all, really--
Wouldn't it be a miracle indeed if we could: "...live terror- war-riot free one family, one earth"?? We are plagued with violence throughout the world and seem unable, any of us, to stop and realize this would not be God's wish for us!--Karenina
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You do very well with this Acrostic form! Your final line says it all, really--
Wouldn't it be a miracle indeed if we could: "...live terror- war-riot free one family, one earth"?? We are plagued with violence throughout the world and seem unable, any of us, to stop and realize this would not be God's wish for us!--Karenina
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
Comment from Boogienights
I find your poems a little disjointed, but quite fascinating . I can't stop reading once I start, although I have a hard time following what you mean sometimes. The last line is clear though.....promoting a warfree earth where we can all live as one family. That's something I can get behind. Thanks for sharing.
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I find your poems a little disjointed, but quite fascinating . I can't stop reading once I start, although I have a hard time following what you mean sometimes. The last line is clear though.....promoting a warfree earth where we can all live as one family. That's something I can get behind. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Good morning,
I'm not new to this site, but I've taken a hiatus and am back for a bit. So, I've never read your work before.
I find the words genuine and inspiring. You expressed your desire for the world to be a better place and for us to act like human beings in the grace of a Loving God. You call for us to have strength.
A beautiful prayer,
Take care,
Rhonda
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Good morning,
I'm not new to this site, but I've taken a hiatus and am back for a bit. So, I've never read your work before.
I find the words genuine and inspiring. You expressed your desire for the world to be a better place and for us to act like human beings in the grace of a Loving God. You call for us to have strength.
A beautiful prayer,
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
Comment from Sanku
very heartfelt request to God. you have listed everythiing this world needs. like good politicians and bards .your pleas are passionate and well justified
i am a bit uncomfortable with some words like' livers' , 'save live crimeless' etc.
all the best for the contest.
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very heartfelt request to God. you have listed everythiing this world needs. like good politicians and bards .your pleas are passionate and well justified
i am a bit uncomfortable with some words like' livers' , 'save live crimeless' etc.
all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
You have written a beautifully descriptive verse for the Acrostic poem. I love your flowing eloquence and choice of descriptions... my favorite line was...
Under infinite blue azure grace us Good luck.
Melissa
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You have written a beautifully descriptive verse for the Acrostic poem. I love your flowing eloquence and choice of descriptions... my favorite line was...
Under infinite blue azure grace us Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author of your very fervent prayer
O God Grace Us Live Lionheart
Smiles to the occasion internal rhyme and mentioning (bards), which I believe you are referring to Poets--- in this line
Command us wise politicians and bards
Gert
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Hello author of your very fervent prayer
O God Grace Us Live Lionheart
Smiles to the occasion internal rhyme and mentioning (bards), which I believe you are referring to Poets--- in this line
Command us wise politicians and bards
Gert
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from WildWithWords
I admire your faith, but struggle to get a handle on your unique style, friend.
Your work is beyond correction under the guise of "Uniqueness". Were it not, I would question the use of "blue azure".... "livers" etc., however these lay beneath the safety of the umbrella of "uniqueness". Unimpeachable.
From a personal point of view, just once I'd like to see you write something in a conventional style, so your work can be judged against all others on equal footing.
The rest of us get torn apart for conventional errors while you escape.
Nothing personal, I'm just interested in the obvious talent which remains undisplayed to conventional eyes, while cloaked in this "uniqueness".
Bill (WildWithWords)
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I admire your faith, but struggle to get a handle on your unique style, friend.
Your work is beyond correction under the guise of "Uniqueness". Were it not, I would question the use of "blue azure".... "livers" etc., however these lay beneath the safety of the umbrella of "uniqueness". Unimpeachable.
From a personal point of view, just once I'd like to see you write something in a conventional style, so your work can be judged against all others on equal footing.
The rest of us get torn apart for conventional errors while you escape.
Nothing personal, I'm just interested in the obvious talent which remains undisplayed to conventional eyes, while cloaked in this "uniqueness".
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, you want peace and you want to live with your faith in peace. Both of those concepts I can totally agree with and I would dearly wish that the rest of the world would want the same. All best. Ulla:))
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Hi there, you want peace and you want to live with your faith in peace. Both of those concepts I can totally agree with and I would dearly wish that the rest of the world would want the same. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from D.Ream
This is rich in imagery and cleverly challenges the reader to think about his/her relationship with God. The rhyme gives the poem a sense of pace which represent something the power of God's love. Thanks for sharing.
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This is rich in imagery and cleverly challenges the reader to think about his/her relationship with God. The rhyme gives the poem a sense of pace which represent something the power of God's love. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
Comment from LisaMay
You always give us sincerity in your writing and this is another example of your deep faith and desire for a harmonious world lived through God's grace and guidance.
"A casteless man live under united world orders" is something to aim for... one family, on our one temporary earth. Asking for wise politicians is a major request.
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You always give us sincerity in your writing and this is another example of your deep faith and desire for a harmonious world lived through God's grace and guidance.
"A casteless man live under united world orders" is something to aim for... one family, on our one temporary earth. Asking for wise politicians is a major request.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
