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Comment from sunnilicious
It would be nice if we could live in a world without war. It should abundant with work, food and have everyone housed. Speak your heart. May blessings rain. Enjoyable poem to read. Great rhyming. Nice work :)
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It would be nice if we could live in a world without war. It should abundant with work, food and have everyone housed. Speak your heart. May blessings rain. Enjoyable poem to read. Great rhyming. Nice work :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
Comment from Rmocruz
I believe to have masterfully penned a universal prayer.
Very creative in achieving your acrostic format.
The spiritual message in enlightening.
Great writing, my pleasure to have read.
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I believe to have masterfully penned a universal prayer.
Very creative in achieving your acrostic format.
The spiritual message in enlightening.
Great writing, my pleasure to have read.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your spiritual acrostic with rhyme. I admired your repeats of "lionheart" for emphasis and your social commentary. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I admired your spiritual acrostic with rhyme. I admired your repeats of "lionheart" for emphasis and your social commentary. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
Comment from WryWriter
A good prayer to God for peace, for earth to be as it was intended. Mankind living lionhearted and free. A great Acrostic poetry. Enjoyed!
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A good prayer to God for peace, for earth to be as it was intended. Mankind living lionhearted and free. A great Acrostic poetry. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your writing is clear and thought provoking. Your line: "Under infinite blue azure grace us" is so beautiful! I know it is not an easy feat to write a poem like this one, but you accomplished a caring and moving piece!
Best,
Deborah
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Dear Author,
Your writing is clear and thought provoking. Your line: "Under infinite blue azure grace us" is so beautiful! I know it is not an easy feat to write a poem like this one, but you accomplished a caring and moving piece!
Best,
Deborah
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
Comment from LIJ Red
The grammar of your acrostic line and syntax throughout are different from the ordinary, I'll observe, but that is part of what poetry is about...excellent post...
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The grammar of your acrostic line and syntax throughout are different from the ordinary, I'll observe, but that is part of what poetry is about...excellent post...
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual acrostic, faithful and championing humanity and living well and honestly. Not sure I understood all your sentences, but I can tell your intentions are good ones, love Dolly x
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An unusual acrostic, faithful and championing humanity and living well and honestly. Not sure I understood all your sentences, but I can tell your intentions are good ones, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
Comment from Cedar
This is very well written. The politicians of the world, especially the leaders, are putting our countries in turmoil and instead of bringing us all closer together, we growing further apart...Bill
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This is very well written. The politicians of the world, especially the leaders, are putting our countries in turmoil and instead of bringing us all closer together, we growing further apart...Bill
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
Comment from called2rite
I love it. Knowing the Word facilitates the understanding of this poem of spiritual knowledge. Keep on writing! comment made on 3-10-19 by called2rite.
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I love it. Knowing the Word facilitates the understanding of this poem of spiritual knowledge. Keep on writing! comment made on 3-10-19 by called2rite.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Though your work is a bit fragmented at times. your subject matter is always spiritual emotional, thought-provoking but mostly i enjoy your sincerity. I also appreciate the thoughts and ideas you bring with your uniqueness.
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Though your work is a bit fragmented at times. your subject matter is always spiritual emotional, thought-provoking but mostly i enjoy your sincerity. I also appreciate the thoughts and ideas you bring with your uniqueness.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
