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Comment from Hitcher
Unfortunately God gave man the gift of free will... and look at what he has done with it : (( The there you describe should be the there we all want to go to live and enjoy, why wouldn't we? Nice, thought provoking poem friend.
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Unfortunately God gave man the gift of free will... and look at what he has done with it : (( The there you describe should be the there we all want to go to live and enjoy, why wouldn't we? Nice, thought provoking poem friend.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Your poem is very well-written. You have mastered a very difficult style of poetry. I tried to write an acrostic poem, but I was told that KDHWETDYNCB FHJRH isn't a word.
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Your poem is very well-written. You have mastered a very difficult style of poetry. I tried to write an acrostic poem, but I was told that KDHWETDYNCB FHJRH isn't a word.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A challenging acrostic poem. Very well written with a clear Christian message. Complimentary artwork. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
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A challenging acrostic poem. Very well written with a clear Christian message. Complimentary artwork. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from Irish Rain
I so wish we could.
Just one earthly family, and everyone
a brother or sister.
No borders, no hunger, no racism.
Maybe in Heaven one day.
Lovely,
Blessings...
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I so wish we could.
Just one earthly family, and everyone
a brother or sister.
No borders, no hunger, no racism.
Maybe in Heaven one day.
Lovely,
Blessings...
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear alcreator! it is also a brilliant philosophical sentiment and a profound statement.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
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this is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear alcreator! it is also a brilliant philosophical sentiment and a profound statement.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from Kamisah Karim
A prayer everyone living in this modern world should say.We are living in the world full of cruelty and humanity is just a word spoken but not practiced.Equality is another word only understood but nowadays people like to overpower the weak and oppressed others in order to be in charged.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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A prayer everyone living in this modern world should say.We are living in the world full of cruelty and humanity is just a word spoken but not practiced.Equality is another word only understood but nowadays people like to overpower the weak and oppressed others in order to be in charged.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your write
it is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Your message is so true
If more people would think and do these things what a better world we would have to live in
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your write
it is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Your message is so true
If more people would think and do these things what a better world we would have to live in
Cookie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, so excellent piece of work of poetry. Your work is so touching and relevant prayer the world needs today. Nice presentation and fair image. Keep it up
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Hi, so excellent piece of work of poetry. Your work is so touching and relevant prayer the world needs today. Nice presentation and fair image. Keep it up
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
Comment from Anne B Francis
Man if only he had the heart of the lion, the strength then he would not be weak and follow in the wrong of life. God gave us free will, but he must weep at its use.
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Man if only he had the heart of the lion, the strength then he would not be weak and follow in the wrong of life. God gave us free will, but he must weep at its use.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
Comment from lyenochka
yes, "To live terror- war-riot free one family, one earth" that sounds like the ideal Earth - If only, we could be free from the influence of the evil one and of the fall. Yes, may the Lord grant us lion hearts to survive.
One comment:
"Devastation controlled humane surviving" (Did you mean "human" or "humane?"
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yes, "To live terror- war-riot free one family, one earth" that sounds like the ideal Earth - If only, we could be free from the influence of the evil one and of the fall. Yes, may the Lord grant us lion hearts to survive.
One comment:
"Devastation controlled humane surviving" (Did you mean "human" or "humane?"
Comment Written 16-May-2019
