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Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
It's like prayed to God which I wish I could master...
I talk to him without swearing or saying anything bad.
I like what you wrote and wish you the best
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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It's like prayed to God which I wish I could master...
I talk to him without swearing or saying anything bad.
I like what you wrote and wish you the best
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you. I request you please clarify your point in the second line of your review, because I do not understand what actually you are trying to say and mean. Because I find the first line and third line contradict your expression.
Thanking you in advance for sending me your clarification.
With the kindest personal regards,
Alcreator Litt Dear
09/04/2020
Comment from Janet Foor
Another thought provoking poem in the form of an acrostic. We do need to daily, sometimes hourly, ask for Gods help.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
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Another thought provoking poem in the form of an acrostic. We do need to daily, sometimes hourly, ask for Gods help.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Louise Michelle
'Let humanity be our religion' holds so much power. We are more alike than we are different. It's the differences that seem to cause the most turmoil on this earth. This is a very powerful and well written poem. Hugs, Lou
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'Let humanity be our religion' holds so much power. We are more alike than we are different. It's the differences that seem to cause the most turmoil on this earth. This is a very powerful and well written poem. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your poem is a tribute to a man's plea for God's help. It is written well with each line expressing a need for survival.
Your thoughts and expressions came together very well.
Thanks for sharing.
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Your poem is a tribute to a man's plea for God's help. It is written well with each line expressing a need for survival.
Your thoughts and expressions came together very well.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from Enoima Okon
"Let humanity be our religion". This line captivated me the most.
Indeed the poem is a piece of advice in a prayer form and it is self explanatory.
If the humanity would listen to it, I believe they could score some points of change.
Eno
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"Let humanity be our religion". This line captivated me the most.
Indeed the poem is a piece of advice in a prayer form and it is self explanatory.
If the humanity would listen to it, I believe they could score some points of change.
Eno
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from samandlancelot
Al,
I love your sentiments, your desire to end world suffering and that we would come together as one family and one earth.
Do you mind if I ask what country you are from. Some of your lines would not be proper English in our country, but if you are translating or use different grammar rules, I want to consider that when I review your writings.
Righteous livers and religious livers makes no sense to me. It's a part of the body that doesn't seem related to religion or righteousness.
Patricia
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Al,
I love your sentiments, your desire to end world suffering and that we would come together as one family and one earth.
Do you mind if I ask what country you are from. Some of your lines would not be proper English in our country, but if you are translating or use different grammar rules, I want to consider that when I review your writings.
Righteous livers and religious livers makes no sense to me. It's a part of the body that doesn't seem related to religion or righteousness.
Patricia
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
Comment from royowen
This great acrostic looks a lot prayer, asking God to grant us wisdom to lie in a non wise world,full of sinful and lustful men. We need God's helping negotiating each new day. Beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : a (casteless) man castless
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This great acrostic looks a lot prayer, asking God to grant us wisdom to lie in a non wise world,full of sinful and lustful men. We need God's helping negotiating each new day. Beautifully written my friend, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : a (casteless) man castless
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for a wise review.
Sorry, casteless is not a typo.
Caste here means:
1. Any of the hereditary, endogamous social classes or subclasses of traditional Hindu society, stratified according to Hindu ritual purity, especially the Brahmin, Kshatriya, Vaisya, and Sudra castes.
2. A social class separated from others by distinctions of hereditary rank, profession, or wealth.
With best regards.
Alcreator Litt Dear
Comment from Earl Corp
My takeaway from your poem O God Graceslive Lionhearted is we should take care of the planet God has given us and each other. Good luck in the contest.
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My takeaway from your poem O God Graceslive Lionhearted is we should take care of the planet God has given us and each other. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Ben Colder
If my words abide in you and you abide in me then ask what you will and the Father will grant it to you. Jesus Said. Thanks for sharing your nice poem. I hope you do well in th contest.
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If my words abide in you and you abide in me then ask what you will and the Father will grant it to you. Jesus Said. Thanks for sharing your nice poem. I hope you do well in th contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Shavon Harrington
Amen Love it it was a very powerful prayer very well written as well and thank you for sharing God bless your heart and keep being a blessing for others
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Amen Love it it was a very powerful prayer very well written as well and thank you for sharing God bless your heart and keep being a blessing for others
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
