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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "O God Grace Us Live Lionheart "God, Omnipresent is here, there, everywhere!
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another inspirational poem on faith written in rhyming acrostic form.I like the repetition of lionhart in the former contest entry, my friend~Debbie
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Another inspirational poem on faith written in rhyming acrostic form.I like the repetition of lionhart in the former contest entry, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Once again a very fine piece of work. How do you do it? "On your gifted land, our temporary living", right off the bat makes me realize it is temporary. Loved it. Best wishes and Thanks!!!
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Once again a very fine piece of work. How do you do it? "On your gifted land, our temporary living", right off the bat makes me realize it is temporary. Loved it. Best wishes and Thanks!!!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
Comment from Puzzle
Yes I think right now we have to be conscious of others needs. We need to stop hoarding supplies. And politicians need to work together so they can help everyone. Good job!
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Yes I think right now we have to be conscious of others needs. We need to stop hoarding supplies. And politicians need to work together so they can help everyone. Good job!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking poem in its prayerful form, in smoothly flowing and casual rhyme, purposely articulated in heartfelt expression, clear in verse and imagery, the presentation dramatic in its entirety...
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In my opinion, a striking poem in its prayerful form, in smoothly flowing and casual rhyme, purposely articulated in heartfelt expression, clear in verse and imagery, the presentation dramatic in its entirety...
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
This is an excellent prayer/poem. Your rhyme is nice--I smiled when you mentioned us 'bards.' Over the centuries, writers have been able to exact change, good or bad. I'm on the side of trying to change the world through writing, as you've done effectively. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest. Happy Easter.
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This is an excellent prayer/poem. Your rhyme is nice--I smiled when you mentioned us 'bards.' Over the centuries, writers have been able to exact change, good or bad. I'm on the side of trying to change the world through writing, as you've done effectively. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest. Happy Easter.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I loved the ending. The world would be a better place if we all lived in peace instead of hate and fear. You did a great job and I think most of us want this.
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I loved the ending. The world would be a better place if we all lived in peace instead of hate and fear. You did a great job and I think most of us want this.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
Comment from TPAC
Deep conveyances, gripping statements able to touch the heart, swinging blade viciously striking front and back foes with might, finding these views profound in their given viewpoints. All stated in my opinion.
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Deep conveyances, gripping statements able to touch the heart, swinging blade viciously striking front and back foes with might, finding these views profound in their given viewpoints. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
Comment from kpepper
Beautiful poem and style! I really enjoyed the message behind it and really wish that more people in this world felt that way too! We take our gift of life here on this Earth for granted more often than not, myself included, so it was nice to be reminded of our God's plan and how precious Earth is.
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Beautiful poem and style! I really enjoyed the message behind it and really wish that more people in this world felt that way too! We take our gift of life here on this Earth for granted more often than not, myself included, so it was nice to be reminded of our God's plan and how precious Earth is.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from lance michaels
The human race definitely needs God's guidance in all the things you pointed out. If everyone could just learn to love more, and hate less, the world would be a much better place to live. Excellent poem!
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The human race definitely needs God's guidance in all the things you pointed out. If everyone could just learn to love more, and hate less, the world would be a much better place to live. Excellent poem!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from nomi338
What a coincidence, my nephew who is a minister named his ministry 'The Lionheart Ministries.' l found your poem to be very interesting in its form and its flow. I do not believe that I have seen a work like this before. I also like very much the content, and so I give it a overall very good rating of approval.
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What a coincidence, my nephew who is a minister named his ministry 'The Lionheart Ministries.' l found your poem to be very interesting in its form and its flow. I do not believe that I have seen a work like this before. I also like very much the content, and so I give it a overall very good rating of approval.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
