Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Chapter Four, Part 3"It was their world long before our existence...
18 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
so many questions I had in the last segment and so many answers now. I am really getting the hang of this great story now. awesome, Yvette...............gary.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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so many questions I had in the last segment and so many answers now. I am really getting the hang of this great story now. awesome, Yvette...............gary.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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So glad you're enjoying, dude -- didn't have lots of time to work on more today (or much of anything FS) since both of the boys popped home for Spring break, but I'm going to catch up....soon! Did you see Romancing the Stone when Ira tells Danny Devito he'll be back for him 'soooon'....? That's how I feel....soooooooooooon. :) ;) Take care, sir and I'm glad you didn't disown me after the guys in the woods things...LOL! ;);) MD
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I'm still chuckling.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. Every time a new character comes in to the group there are feelings of jealousy and everyone is on guard to see if the new-commer is a friend or maybe a foe to the group.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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A very well-written chapter. Every time a new character comes in to the group there are feelings of jealousy and everyone is on guard to see if the new-commer is a friend or maybe a foe to the group.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for keeping up with Maggie and company, Sandra -- I truly do appreciate it!! ;) :) Enjoy the rest of your weekend! ;) ;)
Comment from Debbie Pope
So, Memphis is going to be a house nymph. Is that sort of like Dobbie, the house elf? He was my favorite character in Harry Potter. I don't think that I am going to like Memphis though. She must be ok if she was sent for. We will see.
I used this chapter to center some of the characters into my little brain. I'm ready for the next one now.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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So, Memphis is going to be a house nymph. Is that sort of like Dobbie, the house elf? He was my favorite character in Harry Potter. I don't think that I am going to like Memphis though. She must be ok if she was sent for. We will see.
I used this chapter to center some of the characters into my little brain. I'm ready for the next one now.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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You're so funny!! :) Nah-- not the same. And she is going to take some getting used to, I think. :) ;) At least poor Kato doesn't feel so isolated now...:) ;Thanx so much for your support....the boys came home today, so I didn't have so much time as I was expecting (and I actually threw together another thing as a distraction....we moms/authors need those sometimes), but I will concentrate on Mags and company tomorrow! ;) ) Take care, MQ! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
I like Memphis she appear to be the music for those worn out souls, Yvette. You have the characters of the story (almost), the setting, and little by little you are revealing the Refuge personal. Good story. Kept me glued to the screen. :) You do need a (the) in this line. "mumbling in agreement with large Native" Keep them coming.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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I like Memphis she appear to be the music for those worn out souls, Yvette. You have the characters of the story (almost), the setting, and little by little you are revealing the Refuge personal. Good story. Kept me glued to the screen. :) You do need a (the) in this line. "mumbling in agreement with large Native" Keep them coming.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Oh, thank you for sticking with Maggie and company, Jose -- I'm finally getting all caught up and hope to work on the next part tomorrow....so glad you're out there! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in and for the catch, sir -- take care and have a good Sunday! :) ;)
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is the first of your story I have. It sounds very interesting. Your characters are strong and the dialogue is good. I did not see anything out of place. Have a great night. Shirley
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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This is the first of your story I have. It sounds very interesting. Your characters are strong and the dialogue is good. I did not see anything out of place. Have a great night. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your second set of eyes, Shirley -- you actually did read the 'prequel' to this one this past Monday! ;) :) Thanx for your continued interest! :) :) Take care and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Hi! Beautiful Teacher who has graded all her papers...I like this part of the story a lot not only because Kato was in it more, but also because you have Memphis more developed here. I enjoyed the disclosure which I knew there were witches here all the way around. The familiar of the cat in the first part of the story gave it away. So I have now been vindicated about my assumptions with the disclosure. Also, I have been known to like younger men in my past - LOL! So it still hasn't rattled me about Kato, but how young is he? I'm glad he finally had an explosion of emotion finally! I like them to be vulnerable as well. LOL! I think this story is just starting to catch fire for me. Again all the characters on their own could have their own series. I am really enthralled! I look forward to as many chapters as you can push out for the next couple of weeks. I will be eagerly awaiting more, please... Thank you MRW and CQ - Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Hi! Beautiful Teacher who has graded all her papers...I like this part of the story a lot not only because Kato was in it more, but also because you have Memphis more developed here. I enjoyed the disclosure which I knew there were witches here all the way around. The familiar of the cat in the first part of the story gave it away. So I have now been vindicated about my assumptions with the disclosure. Also, I have been known to like younger men in my past - LOL! So it still hasn't rattled me about Kato, but how young is he? I'm glad he finally had an explosion of emotion finally! I like them to be vulnerable as well. LOL! I think this story is just starting to catch fire for me. Again all the characters on their own could have their own series. I am really enthralled! I look forward to as many chapters as you can push out for the next couple of weeks. I will be eagerly awaiting more, please... Thank you MRW and CQ - Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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You know I don't answer those kind of questions.....ya gotta find out!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping in, ma'am -- didn't have as much time today as I would have liked to continue -- my boys came home for their Spring Break! :) ;) So, maybe I can get to some tomorrow...we'll see! ;) Thanx for everything, Fonda -- you know you rock!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
I wanted to give this another try to see if I could keep up. You have a wonderful imagination and your characters are so interesting, unique and the story seems to be mystery plus fantasy. But it's hard for me to keep so many characters straight. It's just me - I'm sure younger, brighter minds can so keep up the great work!
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I wanted to give this another try to see if I could keep up. You have a wonderful imagination and your characters are so interesting, unique and the story seems to be mystery plus fantasy. But it's hard for me to keep so many characters straight. It's just me - I'm sure younger, brighter minds can so keep up the great work!
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thanx Helen -- appreciate the honesty....know these kinds of tales aren't for everybody...there's a few short stories in the portfolio if you're ever in the mood to try a shorter fantasy on for size!! :) ;) Take care, Professor -- be seeing you 'round the next Post - LOL!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Miss Sherry
More and more interesting. I love this story, it is exciting in a quiet way. Something a person could read all afternoon and never tire of. I think you are a great writer and don't let anybody say differently!! Waiting for that next chapter.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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More and more interesting. I love this story, it is exciting in a quiet way. Something a person could read all afternoon and never tire of. I think you are a great writer and don't let anybody say differently!! Waiting for that next chapter.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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You're awesome and glad you're enjoying! :) ;) Take care up there! :) ;) Yvette
