Life
A precious flower17 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Maybe you needed two roses in your artwork, you know. . .one for light up and then the fading one would be following your bliss and definitely fading out. :) Nice short poem that talks about how life works.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Maybe you needed two roses in your artwork, you know. . .one for light up and then the fading one would be following your bliss and definitely fading out. :) Nice short poem that talks about how life works.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Maybe. I went with a single fading Rose because you can still signs of the glory thst once was. I appreciate your thoughts on this.
Thanks Moongirl
Best
John
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Comment from donette1914
very nice piece
you put some thought in this and it shows.
very interesting of words that you use to draws ones in
i feel your an outstanding writer
it was a pleasure to read your work
i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/17/2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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very nice piece
you put some thought in this and it shows.
very interesting of words that you use to draws ones in
i feel your an outstanding writer
it was a pleasure to read your work
i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/17/2019
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Why thank you Donette. Outstanding Writer, wish that were true. :)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Best
John
Comment from 24chas
Wow, Lordinajamjar, you just led a whole life in three lines. Very impressive and you really said a lot as well. Good artwork helped the presentation. Good job.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Wow, Lordinajamjar, you just led a whole life in three lines. Very impressive and you really said a lot as well. Good artwork helped the presentation. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Haha Chas. Thanks. I really did try to achieve that. So glad you see it that way too.
Best
John
Comment from Yvon
Not much you can do with a two four two. Maybe you smoke cigars and you really enjoy them like some men they express success in life. Or Start to finish. Very odd photo for this poem.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Not much you can do with a two four two. Maybe you smoke cigars and you really enjoy them like some men they express success in life. Or Start to finish. Very odd photo for this poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019
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Ha ha nice one Yvon. Its great to get another point of view. So different to what I intended but very valid my friend. A cigar wasn't in my mind but it is there now. LOL
Best
John
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Puff
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life in a nutshell here! I wish you luck with the 2-4-2 poetry contest, you seem you have life sorted in these seven words! I just hope life isn't over this quickly! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Life in a nutshell here! I wish you luck with the 2-4-2 poetry contest, you seem you have life sorted in these seven words! I just hope life isn't over this quickly! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you dolly. I too hope life is long and fruitful. ha ha ha
best
John
Comment from victor 66
I'm impressed that you have put words together in this two - four - two format and they flow well together. There is truth to "light up, follow your bliss, fade out" because that's the way life works. We are all going to fade out, we might as well enjoy our time here no matter how short or long that time is. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I'm impressed that you have put words together in this two - four - two format and they flow well together. There is truth to "light up, follow your bliss, fade out" because that's the way life works. We are all going to fade out, we might as well enjoy our time here no matter how short or long that time is. Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you Victor,
We both agree then on the meaning of life. :)
Best
John
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You are most welcome, and it was my pleasure, John. Have a very nice day.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Our lives are much like a flower we only have a short time to live and make our lives blissful before we start to fade away and disappear from the face of the earth.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Our lives are much like a flower we only have a short time to live and make our lives blissful before we start to fade away and disappear from the face of the earth.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra I am very grateful for your kind review.
Life is Life so they say. :)
Best
John
Comment from Mark D. R.
such a creative way to express the sadness of a wilting flower or relationship
to do so in just eight syllables - terrific
hopefully this contest entry will not fade out with our FS reviewers!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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such a creative way to express the sadness of a wilting flower or relationship
to do so in just eight syllables - terrific
hopefully this contest entry will not fade out with our FS reviewers!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Mark I am grateful for your encouraging words.
Thank you
Best
John
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, John.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery of the light
is effective, along with "Bliss."
-That is a good way to
describe appreciating
the here and now before
it fades out.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image, John.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery of the light
is effective, along with "Bliss."
-That is a good way to
describe appreciating
the here and now before
it fades out.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Oh thank you Pam for your wonderful review. I am most grateful.
All the best
John
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You are very welcome, John.
Comment from LisaMay
You can't get much more succinct than this! It's a good summary for a life well lived. Lucky indeed is the person who can 'follow their bliss', if it is possible it will surely light up their lives.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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You can't get much more succinct than this! It's a good summary for a life well lived. Lucky indeed is the person who can 'follow their bliss', if it is possible it will surely light up their lives.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Ha thank you Lisa for this lovely review. Indeed we should all follow our bliss.
Best
John
