Lingering Light
A 5-7-5 Entry16 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, June,
Thank you for sharing your well-presented five-seven-five for the poetry contest. Your words match the image well, and one can feel the sun slipping into the purple haze.
Good luck to you in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Hi, June,
Thank you for sharing your well-presented five-seven-five for the poetry contest. Your words match the image well, and one can feel the sun slipping into the purple haze.
Good luck to you in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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The twilight hours ca be most beautiful. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Sugarray77
A beautiful piece, June, that lulls the reader into a lazy malaise. I enjoyed reading this poem and I DO think the artwork was a clever choice in that it sets us up for the reclining atmosphere of the verse. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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A beautiful piece, June, that lulls the reader into a lazy malaise. I enjoyed reading this poem and I DO think the artwork was a clever choice in that it sets us up for the reclining atmosphere of the verse. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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The twilight hours ca be most beautiful. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It's amazing the beautiful hues and colors that show up as the sun goes down and it shimmers and reflects the skies beauty on the water. You captured it superbly in so few words in this well written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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It's amazing the beautiful hues and colors that show up as the sun goes down and it shimmers and reflects the skies beauty on the water. You captured it superbly in so few words in this well written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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The twilight hours ca be most beautiful. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.
Comment from patcelaw
The wording of this 5-7-5 is perfect for the photo you have chosen to highlight your words. May you have a blessed weekend.
Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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The wording of this 5-7-5 is perfect for the photo you have chosen to highlight your words. May you have a blessed weekend.
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thank you Teri!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sky can conjure up some amazing colour as we think it is reluctantly slipping away to delight those down under. Pretty soothing words here June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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The sky can conjure up some amazing colour as we think it is reluctantly slipping away to delight those down under. Pretty soothing words here June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I;m glad you enjoyed my piece on lingering light - twilight can be beautiful!
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi June,
This is a gorgeous poem. A super contest entry, complemented perfectly by the visual presentation you have crafted. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Hi June,
This is a gorgeous poem. A super contest entry, complemented perfectly by the visual presentation you have crafted. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I;m glad you enjoyed my piece on lingering light - twilight can be beautiful!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem describing the lingering light of a sunset when the hues of the sun are still visible long after the sun itself disappeared behind the horizon.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem describing the lingering light of a sunset when the hues of the sun are still visible long after the sun itself disappeared behind the horizon.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I;m glad you enjoyed my piece on lingering light - twilight can be beautiful!
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your 5-7-5 contest entry. Purple haze is my favorite sunset found in the Islands mainly. I liked your little poem so much, sunsets can be so wonderful my friend. XXK.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Good luck with your 5-7-5 contest entry. Purple haze is my favorite sunset found in the Islands mainly. I liked your little poem so much, sunsets can be so wonderful my friend. XXK.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I;m glad you enjoyed my piece on lingering light - twilight can be beautiful!
Comment from meeshu
You have created some great images here, especially in purple haze. Your writing is thoughtful and will make a fine entry in the 5-7-5 contest. well done, June...................meeshu
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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You have created some great images here, especially in purple haze. Your writing is thoughtful and will make a fine entry in the 5-7-5 contest. well done, June...................meeshu
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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I;m glad you enjoyed my piece on lingering light - twilight can be beautiful!
