The Letter
Continuation of a story where there is hell to pay.6 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I certainly would not want to be a member of this family.
Maybe they should have considered seeking out the help of a Holy Man. Only the Spirit of God can stave off a curse such as this. It is truly a tool of the devil. Well done my friend. This is an interesting story. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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I certainly would not want to be a member of this family.
Maybe they should have considered seeking out the help of a Holy Man. Only the Spirit of God can stave off a curse such as this. It is truly a tool of the devil. Well done my friend. This is an interesting story. Nancy:)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Well Nancy thank you. Like I said there is history and fiction mixed. Guess which is history?
Comment from called2rite
The opposite? Maybe, of an almost parallel real life battle in the spiritual realm that many face. Very vivid pictures you painted with words. comment made on 3-9-19.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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The opposite? Maybe, of an almost parallel real life battle in the spiritual realm that many face. Very vivid pictures you painted with words. comment made on 3-9-19.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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thank you call2rite, I'm glad you liked it. Down here we have witches flying around,
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Fiction and nonfiction together gives a brilliant story. It is almost like a fantasy adventure.
I enjoyed reading this story and really, it deserves 6 stars but I have no more at this time.
My best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Fiction and nonfiction together gives a brilliant story. It is almost like a fantasy adventure.
I enjoyed reading this story and really, it deserves 6 stars but I have no more at this time.
My best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra. The family is haunted and the story is old. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good story. I liked the flow of it. The main character was believable and I could really sense the emotion in the piece. Nice job of writing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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This was a good story. I liked the flow of it. The main character was believable and I could really sense the emotion in the piece. Nice job of writing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you 24chas. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from JudyE
This is well-written and you've used good description. The dialogue too suits the characters. You held my interest right to the end.
I did have a few suggestions:
large tracks of land - this should be 'large tracts'.
other peoples' sweat - the apostrophe goes after 'people' - people's sweat.
Cattle wander freely - cattle wandered freely
As looked at the mirror, - did you mean 'as I looked at the mirror'?
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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This is well-written and you've used good description. The dialogue too suits the characters. You held my interest right to the end.
I did have a few suggestions:
large tracks of land - this should be 'large tracts'.
other peoples' sweat - the apostrophe goes after 'people' - people's sweat.
Cattle wander freely - cattle wandered freely
As looked at the mirror, - did you mean 'as I looked at the mirror'?
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Judy, Judy, Judy, where were you. :) Thank you. I always check and check but I read what I wrote and my mind reads what wrote. Thank you for pointing out my errors I really appreciate you pointing out my errors, That means you read it. :) Thank you.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this story. I very much enjoyed reading it. I like the historical details you mix in to make the story realistic. Even though there are obvious fictional aspects to the story, your characters are believable. I would read a novel about the protagonist or his son having adventures and meeting companions to help them try to end the curse. Your diacrÃticos are not displaying right in your story. I don't know how to fix that.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you for sharing this story. I very much enjoyed reading it. I like the historical details you mix in to make the story realistic. Even though there are obvious fictional aspects to the story, your characters are believable. I would read a novel about the protagonist or his son having adventures and meeting companions to help them try to end the curse. Your diacrÃticos are not displaying right in your story. I don't know how to fix that.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank KyColonel. It is history my grandpa lived through it and he went nuts. I'm glad you liked it,
