My Words Will Not Pass Away
acrostic contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
My words will not pass away. An acrostic poem in an almost continuous teacup style that covers many events in the Bible. My favorite line: Without Me you can do nothing. Without Him, we wouldn't be able to exist.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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My words will not pass away. An acrostic poem in an almost continuous teacup style that covers many events in the Bible. My favorite line: Without Me you can do nothing. Without Him, we wouldn't be able to exist.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2019
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Dear WryWriter, Thank you for your comments and review. I didn't realize that it was in an almost continuous teacup style! Thanks for noticing. Dove
Comment from Ricky1024
Deeply religious and well constructed as if a Bible on it's own.
Adjective and Objective Contents were Excellent and Exceptional.
No Grammar issues.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Deeply religious and well constructed as if a Bible on it's own.
Adjective and Objective Contents were Excellent and Exceptional.
No Grammar issues.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Dear Ricky, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Dove,
This is a lovely write with a beautiful visual presentation. Your religious faith certainly comes through loud and clear through your verse. Nothing I see here or me to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Hi Dove,
This is a lovely write with a beautiful visual presentation. Your religious faith certainly comes through loud and clear through your verse. Nothing I see here or me to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful acrostic and I think you have fulfilled the brief here which seems like quite a tall order, do you think the poem would look better left aligned? So that you can see the first letter of each word more clearly? It's just a thought, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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A faithful acrostic and I think you have fulfilled the brief here which seems like quite a tall order, do you think the poem would look better left aligned? So that you can see the first letter of each word more clearly? It's just a thought, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thanks for your comments, review, and suggestion. Love, Donna x
Comment from 24chas
This was an interesting write, Dovemarie. I liked the way you used the Bible verses to flesh out your piece. Your faith comes through in this acrostic. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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This was an interesting write, Dovemarie. I liked the way you used the Bible verses to flesh out your piece. Your faith comes through in this acrostic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Dear 24chas, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
They are the words that we should never forget and you have succinctly chosen the right phrases. The one that is missing means the most to me. "Forgive us our trespasses as we forgive those who trespass against us." However, the rest are wonderful they say it all.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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They are the words that we should never forget and you have succinctly chosen the right phrases. The one that is missing means the most to me. "Forgive us our trespasses as we forgive those who trespass against us." However, the rest are wonderful they say it all.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Dear Raffaelina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
