What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Society's Throwaways"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
5 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I see what an animal lover you are. I have a dog via my grandkids. He comes and stays here--along for the visit. He is part Fremch Poodle and part Bichon Frise.
Animals are much like people, we need to be loved to grow and thrive. I enjoyed your sweet poem.
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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I see what an animal lover you are. I have a dog via my grandkids. He comes and stays here--along for the visit. He is part Fremch Poodle and part Bichon Frise.
Animals are much like people, we need to be loved to grow and thrive. I enjoyed your sweet poem.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much for the review and the stars. Both are greatly appreciated!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Mystery poet, I gave you your 3rd vote.
Your poem is on a topic that means a lot to me .
I have a friend that has spent her life trying to save strays and abandon cats .
She has asked me often to help out ..bottle feeding newborn , taming feral cats in the hope to find them a home..
The credulity towards pets is another sad reality .. Starving them , left on a short chain outside without adequate shelter , beatings etc
...dogs are so called man's best friend...it's a shame that too many people are instead dogs worse enemy .
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Ciao Mystery poet, I gave you your 3rd vote.
Your poem is on a topic that means a lot to me .
I have a friend that has spent her life trying to save strays and abandon cats .
She has asked me often to help out ..bottle feeding newborn , taming feral cats in the hope to find them a home..
The credulity towards pets is another sad reality .. Starving them , left on a short chain outside without adequate shelter , beatings etc
...dogs are so called man's best friend...it's a shame that too many people are instead dogs worse enemy .
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the stars, review and the vote! All very much appreciated!
Comment from sfharper
Ah, so sad, it is heartbreaking how some animals get treated and your poem conveys this well. The ending lines reiterates the opening to help reinforce that message. Enjoyed reading it, very powerful.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Ah, so sad, it is heartbreaking how some animals get treated and your poem conveys this well. The ending lines reiterates the opening to help reinforce that message. Enjoyed reading it, very powerful.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the stars and the review!
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I can tell this is dear to your heart. It's such a tragedy how some people treat innocent animals and throw them away. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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This was a good read. I can tell this is dear to your heart. It's such a tragedy how some people treat innocent animals and throw them away. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much - for the stars, the review and the good luck wishes!
Comment from jenintorre
You have written a very sad and poignant cinquain poem and good entry for the competition.
Check your third line, I have counted 7 syllables and there should be 6. Good luck. Jen.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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You have written a very sad and poignant cinquain poem and good entry for the competition.
Check your third line, I have counted 7 syllables and there should be 6. Good luck. Jen.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I will check, but I thought I counted them correctly. Thank you for the stars and the review. Very much appreciated!
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You were right. I accidentally put in the put down the article "the", which I had not in the original scribble I wrote down. Thanks for catching that!
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My pleasure. I am sure you would do the same for me. Jen. X
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Not sure I would need to.
