Magical Mobius
Back to front haiku for a mobius strip15 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Fascinating. Your mind works quite differently than mine. I want TIME to do this! I applaud the fact that you were able to uniquely and creatively produce something poetically with this topic. Genius. Great job and keep thinking like this because I am impressed. Beyond belief.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Fascinating. Your mind works quite differently than mine. I want TIME to do this! I applaud the fact that you were able to uniquely and creatively produce something poetically with this topic. Genius. Great job and keep thinking like this because I am impressed. Beyond belief.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Thank you Willow your praise is way too generous. I am just having fun with stuff. I am just an average Joe happy to have found a spot where I can play surrounded by amazing talent.
Thank you so much.
Best
John
Comment from Connie Frazier
Very interesting! I had never heard of a Mobius strip. Thanks for the explanation, and your poem is wonderful. I love that the 1st and 2nd lines mirror each other. I see the Mobius strip in your words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Very interesting! I had never heard of a Mobius strip. Thanks for the explanation, and your poem is wonderful. I love that the 1st and 2nd lines mirror each other. I see the Mobius strip in your words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Connie I am si delighted to enlightened you about the Mobius. There are so many others that have never heard if it either. But now you can help spreas the word and show it off as a party trick. ;)
Alk the best
John
Comment from Artasylum
Well I love this site...
LORDINAJAMJAR
I learn something every day and get to expand my horizons... thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Well I love this site...
LORDINAJAMJAR
I learn something every day and get to expand my horizons... thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Well thank you very much Diana. I appreciate your kind comments.
Best
John
Comment from meeshu
This is a fine piece. It has a wonderful lesson in abstract thinking enclosed. this was actually covered in my schooling now it's an internet trick. sad. Well done, Lord............................meeshu
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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This is a fine piece. It has a wonderful lesson in abstract thinking enclosed. this was actually covered in my schooling now it's an internet trick. sad. Well done, Lord............................meeshu
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Meeshu.
You are one of the lucky ones to have had this included in your schooling.
Best
John
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Hello Lordinajar, I am hearing/knowing about the Möbius for the first time and thank you for sharing your knowledge.
This innovative poem is awesome... reading the same forwards and backwards. How delightful is the human mind!
I truly enjoyed the presentation and the notes you provided.
Cheers!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Hello Lordinajar, I am hearing/knowing about the Möbius for the first time and thank you for sharing your knowledge.
This innovative poem is awesome... reading the same forwards and backwards. How delightful is the human mind!
I truly enjoyed the presentation and the notes you provided.
Cheers!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra. So glad you enjoyed the presentation.
The mobius truly is an awesome thing to show to kids and adults alike.
Best
John
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You're welcome... Will try it with my son.
Comment from Janet Foor
Interesting concept, interesting 5/7/5 poem.
I had not heard of a mobius strip so I will have to google it and see what I've been missing. Haha
Fun poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Interesting concept, interesting 5/7/5 poem.
I had not heard of a mobius strip so I will have to google it and see what I've been missing. Haha
Fun poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks Janet. I appreciate your comments. Enjoy the Mobius.
Best
John
Comment from Mark D. R.
Oh yea, the infamous Möbius strip! What possibilities you have twisted in this syllable restricted verse.
Do like the waltzing imagery!
Minor suggestion: some FS members may have visual acuity issues and may find reading your script font difficult. If you insist on the italics, it is IMHO redundant in script.
Consider centering your short verses.
Good luck for your contest entry.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Oh yea, the infamous Möbius strip! What possibilities you have twisted in this syllable restricted verse.
Do like the waltzing imagery!
Minor suggestion: some FS members may have visual acuity issues and may find reading your script font difficult. If you insist on the italics, it is IMHO redundant in script.
Consider centering your short verses.
Good luck for your contest entry.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Mark for a great review. I acted on your advice and changed the font, centering etc.
Best
John
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written interesting 5-7-5 poem about the magical Mobius strip that seems to have endless possibilities to entertain the mind with extraordinary outcomes.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A very well-written interesting 5-7-5 poem about the magical Mobius strip that seems to have endless possibilities to entertain the mind with extraordinary outcomes.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra.
I enjoy experimenting. Glad you liked it.
Best
John
Comment from LisaMay
Playtime! I love the mobius strip too... i am more used to it being called the moebius band. It is a fascinating thing to play with, especially cutting as you have suggested.
What a cool idea to make a haiku about it. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Playtime! I love the mobius strip too... i am more used to it being called the moebius band. It is a fascinating thing to play with, especially cutting as you have suggested.
What a cool idea to make a haiku about it. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Oh great a fellow Mobiun.
Thanks Lisa.
Comment from moongirlwriter
Just love it! A good part of the fun writing in the Fanstory app. is seeing how playful different people are and how they extract something quite lovely out of nothing.
I didn't actually try it but it does sound very playful and fun.. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Just love it! A good part of the fun writing in the Fanstory app. is seeing how playful different people are and how they extract something quite lovely out of nothing.
I didn't actually try it but it does sound very playful and fun.. Good Luck.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Moongirl. I had fun experimenting with this.
All the best
John
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