Miscellaneous Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Less is more"Poems not in other books
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Comment from LIJ Red
Wasn't it Sandburg who coined the phrase, "Someday they will give a war and nobody will come?" ABCDE, even the last line's in step. Excellent abc poem.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Wasn't it Sandburg who coined the phrase, "Someday they will give a war and nobody will come?" ABCDE, even the last line's in step. Excellent abc poem.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I believe it was. Thanks so much for the kind comments, they are appreciated :) Craig
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Interesting. A short poem solving
a few of the worlds problems, to
make things better. LOL Well written
ABC poem Craig. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Interesting. A short poem solving
a few of the worlds problems, to
make things better. LOL Well written
ABC poem Craig. Nancy:)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much, Nancy, I appreciate the kind words :) Craig
Comment from Gloria ....
I really enjoy the sentiment in this wee poem. Such a cool line, does peace erupt if no one's there to fight? It's quite possible this is in fact truthful.
Living life with less is good but not so little that that also becomes a burden.
Excellent write and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I really enjoy the sentiment in this wee poem. Such a cool line, does peace erupt if no one's there to fight? It's quite possible this is in fact truthful.
Living life with less is good but not so little that that also becomes a burden.
Excellent write and I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the delightful stars, the thoughtful comments and the good luck wishes Gloria. And thanks for the continued support as well. All are greatly appreciated. Craig
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the message in your ABC poem, Craig. I think you have a winner here and my favorite line was:
"Does peace erupt if no one's there to fight?"
The joy of people just living in harmony like the boys in your picture is the best wealth.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Loved the message in your ABC poem, Craig. I think you have a winner here and my favorite line was:
"Does peace erupt if no one's there to fight?"
The joy of people just living in harmony like the boys in your picture is the best wealth.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Agreed without reservation, Helen. Thanks for the lovely review. Craig
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Craig. Great job with the letter selection and the message. The picture is great, too. Those boys look like they are enjoying life even if they have little in the way of material things. Your entry is well presented. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Craig. Great job with the letter selection and the message. The picture is great, too. Those boys look like they are enjoying life even if they have little in the way of material things. Your entry is well presented. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the very kind comments, Jan. They do look happy, don't they? Cheers, Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely composed poem. Image is adorable. Cute kids. This is the most important line from my point of view:
"Beloved, the mind that does not harbour spite."
It would be so nice if everyone felt that way.
Good luck in the contest.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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This is a very nicely composed poem. Image is adorable. Cute kids. This is the most important line from my point of view:
"Beloved, the mind that does not harbour spite."
It would be so nice if everyone felt that way.
Good luck in the contest.
Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the good luck wishes and thoughtful review, Marilyn. Both are much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Debbie Pope
I heartedly approve of where you are going with this one, Craig. My favorite part of this poem is the descriptive line and the last two lines. Oh, and that photo. I can't quit looking at those adorable little boys. Those boys have time on their hands. They have to fill it with their own imagination. Their burden is light. And matters don't change when we start talking about adults. Less is less stress. Period.
This is a good entry my humble friend.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I heartedly approve of where you are going with this one, Craig. My favorite part of this poem is the descriptive line and the last two lines. Oh, and that photo. I can't quit looking at those adorable little boys. Those boys have time on their hands. They have to fill it with their own imagination. Their burden is light. And matters don't change when we start talking about adults. Less is less stress. Period.
This is a good entry my humble friend.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for the kind and thoughtful review, Debbie. Yes, they look like they are enjoying their lot, don't they? Much appreciated, Craig
Comment from Dawn Munro
Less is most definitely more. Some of my happiest times were spent in circumstances that had no connection to material wealth, even what is considered normal comfort. When peace of mind is the norm, there's room for love and joy, and no room for hate.
What a wonderful message in your small ABC poem, Craig. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Less is most definitely more. Some of my happiest times were spent in circumstances that had no connection to material wealth, even what is considered normal comfort. When peace of mind is the norm, there's room for love and joy, and no room for hate.
What a wonderful message in your small ABC poem, Craig. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for the great comments, Dawn, and for the good luck wishes as well. The ability of wealth to bring happiness is certainly overrated. Cheers, Craig
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You're very welcome -- always a pleasure, Craig!
Comment from Artasylum
Several excellent life points... Does peace erupt if no one's there to fight?
2) Enjoying life with less, our burden's light. Thanks for this thoughtful piece... thanks so much and gook luck... yours, diana
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Several excellent life points... Does peace erupt if no one's there to fight?
2) Enjoying life with less, our burden's light. Thanks for this thoughtful piece... thanks so much and gook luck... yours, diana
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the kind comments and good wishes, Diana; both are very much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved these uplifting and heartfelt words, this is the best ABC poem I have read so far, it is a winner for me. I love the sentiments behind these words too, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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I loved these uplifting and heartfelt words, this is the best ABC poem I have read so far, it is a winner for me. I love the sentiments behind these words too, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the kind and generous words, Dolly. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and grateful for the good wishes, too :) Cheers, Craig
