I'm Free at Last
In your loving arms52 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful, really beautiful. It's like a beautiful prayer or a psalms. I can sense the opening up and pouring out of your heart to the Lord in this one. I really enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written offering. Very well done!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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This is beautiful, really beautiful. It's like a beautiful prayer or a psalms. I can sense the opening up and pouring out of your heart to the Lord in this one. I really enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written offering. Very well done!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Jeffrey for your most understanding review and the extra special sixth star..
It came in 2nd place. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Boogienights
This is a really beautiful affirmation of what God can do for you. Definitely followed the rules for sonnets, Iike this very much. I tried my hand at writing one, but I find it hard to write poetry with specific rules. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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This is a really beautiful affirmation of what God can do for you. Definitely followed the rules for sonnets, Iike this very much. I tried my hand at writing one, but I find it hard to write poetry with specific rules. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your most understanding review. Sonnets do have a lot of rules but i'ts kind of fun to work through.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Heather Knight
We have all made mistakes, but it's good to know we can be forgiven.
Sometimes it's difficult to choose the Lord over the world ...
I love the last two lines. They are a perfect conclusion.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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We have all made mistakes, but it's good to know we can be forgiven.
Sometimes it's difficult to choose the Lord over the world ...
I love the last two lines. They are a perfect conclusion.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Maria for your most understanding review .
Thank you too for your good wishes. It came in 2nd place. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
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Congrats!
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Thanks Maria. I appreciate your kind encouragement.
Comment from QC Poet
A Great captivating read notes very helpful to readers and those of looking learn how to construct it's format, Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insights.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A Great captivating read notes very helpful to readers and those of looking learn how to construct it's format, Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insights.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your most understanding review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mastery
Wow! So very well written, author..and so inspiring. I could feel your words to a certain extent and that is really something. good luck to you in the contest author. Great Sonnet. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Wow! So very well written, author..and so inspiring. I could feel your words to a certain extent and that is really something. good luck to you in the contest author. Great Sonnet. Bob
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Bob for your most understanding review.
Thank you too for the good luck wishes. It came in 2nd. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
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Congratulations!
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Thanks Bob. I appreciate your encouragement.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
What a moving and heartfelt Shakespearean sonnet that follows the requirements perfectly. I thoroughly enjoyed the rhyme scheme and your third quatrain - not only for its form, but for its content. You handled iambic pentameter very well, too!
Kudos and Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer,
What a moving and heartfelt Shakespearean sonnet that follows the requirements perfectly. I thoroughly enjoyed the rhyme scheme and your third quatrain - not only for its form, but for its content. You handled iambic pentameter very well, too!
Kudos and Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Diane for your most understanding review.
Thank you too for the good luck wishes. It came in 2nd. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancyjam
A beautifully crafted Sonnet with a lovely message.
If we are sincerely sorry for mistakes of the past
He will surely forgive us.
Your rhymes are lovely and the meter is strong.
Nice turn in the third stanza and a meaningful closing couplet.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A beautifully crafted Sonnet with a lovely message.
If we are sincerely sorry for mistakes of the past
He will surely forgive us.
Your rhymes are lovely and the meter is strong.
Nice turn in the third stanza and a meaningful closing couplet.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Nancy for your most understanding review.
Thank you too for the good luck wishes. It came in 2nd. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
Comment from CathyM
I loved this poem. It speaks of the ways we are cared for and what we do in this world that does not praise him. It is freeing when we live the life of a good person. You expressed this very eloquently.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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I loved this poem. It speaks of the ways we are cared for and what we do in this world that does not praise him. It is freeing when we live the life of a good person. You expressed this very eloquently.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Cathy for your most understanding review and for the extra special sixth star.
Thank you too for the good luck wishes. It came in 2nd. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, well-written spiritual sonnet that with an uplifting theme.
No, we can't undo our past, but--as your poem says--the Lord forgives and helps
us focus on the future.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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This is a lovely, well-written spiritual sonnet that with an uplifting theme.
No, we can't undo our past, but--as your poem says--the Lord forgives and helps
us focus on the future.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Janice for your most understanding review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to the Poet who wrote this Sonnet
I'm Free at Last and how this poet described so well of how one can feel so free once they are in the loving arms of Our Lord.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Smiles to the Poet who wrote this Sonnet
I'm Free at Last and how this poet described so well of how one can feel so free once they are in the loving arms of Our Lord.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Gert for your most understanding review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome Janet
Gert
