~ Hardships In Life ~
ABC Poem14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem about how we handle hardships in our lives. We can only learn to be stronger when we go through hardship and fight until we conquer the obstacles we are stronger thereafter.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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A very well-written ABC poem about how we handle hardships in our lives. We can only learn to be stronger when we go through hardship and fight until we conquer the obstacles we are stronger thereafter.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra for taking the time to review my ABC poem. Your comments are appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, DD.
-I like the formatting of your poem.
-A well written poem with
effective rhyme and message.
-I like the image of
"burdens with a staggered sway."
-The concluding line is
a good one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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-Nice image and presentation, DD.
-I like the formatting of your poem.
-A well written poem with
effective rhyme and message.
-I like the image of
"burdens with a staggered sway."
-The concluding line is
a good one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Pam, for your supportive comments on my ABC poem. I am much appreciative. ~DD
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You are very welcome, DD.
Comment from BeasPeas
A very good ABC poem. I like its positive message. When we're going through things it seems as if they will never end, but when they're over we can be proud we hung in there. Good luck in the contest with this encouraging message. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A very good ABC poem. I like its positive message. When we're going through things it seems as if they will never end, but when they're over we can be proud we hung in there. Good luck in the contest with this encouraging message. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Marilyn for your thoughtful comments. I hope you are feeling better. ~DD
Comment from Sally Law
Hi there DD! I enjoyed this encouraging poem very much. ABC poetry is new to me but fun to read. Your middle of the alphabet style is unique. This should do very well in the contest.
All my best,
Sal :-)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Hi there DD! I enjoyed this encouraging poem very much. ABC poetry is new to me but fun to read. Your middle of the alphabet style is unique. This should do very well in the contest.
All my best,
Sal :-)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sally. I appreciate you taking the time to review my short poem and for your supportive comments. ~DD
Comment from Rubylou
Hi DD,
Wow, there is such a great message in your words. I agree, hardships do make one stronger and teach us for future experiences.
It's what we do the next time around that proves what we have learned from the past.
You used great word choice, 'jousting, lugging, staggered sway," etc...
Rubylou
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Hi DD,
Wow, there is such a great message in your words. I agree, hardships do make one stronger and teach us for future experiences.
It's what we do the next time around that proves what we have learned from the past.
You used great word choice, 'jousting, lugging, staggered sway," etc...
Rubylou
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Rubylou for your thoughtful review and appreciation of my short poem. I am grateful for your comments. ~DD
Comment from Irish Rain
Absolutely.
They make us stronger, smarter, and
more determined to reach our goals.
Also, used as contrast, they point
us in the direction of new dreams.
Lovely ABC poem!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Absolutely.
They make us stronger, smarter, and
more determined to reach our goals.
Also, used as contrast, they point
us in the direction of new dreams.
Lovely ABC poem!
Blessings...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you Irish Rain. As always, I appreciate your review. I do apologize for the delayed response. Warm regards. ~DD
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi DD,
I enjoyed reading your ABC poem today :) This is a wonderful contest entry. You followed the alphabetical requirement well. I like the way you set it up to be angled on the page with the final line being the enlightenment moment. I enjoyed your message about hardships being the building blocks. Well said. Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Hi DD,
I enjoyed reading your ABC poem today :) This is a wonderful contest entry. You followed the alphabetical requirement well. I like the way you set it up to be angled on the page with the final line being the enlightenment moment. I enjoyed your message about hardships being the building blocks. Well said. Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019
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Thank you Joy for your most thoughtful review. I appreciate your support and apologize for the delayed response. Warmest regards. ~DD
Comment from Heather Knight
This is so true... and so very well-said. You have a way with words.
I especially like the fourth line as it is very visual.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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This is so true... and so very well-said. You have a way with words.
I especially like the fourth line as it is very visual.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you Maria JG for your thoughtful review of my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Poems,
This is a great write with a very positive, encouraging message. A super contest entry. Best of luck in the voting. Very nice visual presentation is perfect in helping to convey your message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Hi Poems,
This is a great write with a very positive, encouraging message. A super contest entry. Best of luck in the voting. Very nice visual presentation is perfect in helping to convey your message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you Jan for your most thoughtful review of my short poem. I appreciate your comments. ~DD
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When life should be easier in retirement, daily issues seem harder to process and deal with it seems, I could identify with your words here, a fine ABC poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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When life should be easier in retirement, daily issues seem harder to process and deal with it seems, I could identify with your words here, a fine ABC poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to review my short poem. I hope you are well. ~DD
