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Me and You 40+ years of Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "My Love My Wife"
Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez

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Comment from Teri7
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I enjoyed reading and reviewing this ABC poem about your lovely wife. You used very good and very heartfelt words with a lovely picture to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review compliments, and encouragement.
Comment from lyenochka
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Wonderful to have such a loving relationship with your wife! It's a blessing that all happily married couples can thank God for. Great way to express the love you share in these two ABC format verses.

"Love definitely has it's challenging stride, " (its) because you mean the possessive. 'it's' is the contraction of 'it is.'

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments, I'll correct the spelling shortly. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Randa Dayle
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I hope that is a picture of you and your wife, how adorable! I love the abc poem and I wish you luck in the contest. I think you did a wonderful job! Keep on writing!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
    It is, Thank you for the review, compliments, and Good Luck wishes.
Comment from I. Lee
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What a beautiful poem depicting love in its simplest form! It's amazing how the roller coaster of life has its challenges. Yet what makes the ride worthwhile is the person we have riding beside us seeing us through it all. God bless and good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a lovely entry for the ABC Poetry contest.
Your devotion to your wife is clear in this pretty verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and positive encouragement. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from patcelaw
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I can feel the love you have for Angela in every line. You have make your love for her so plain. I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonder filled week.
Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments. God Bless you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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What a beautiful love poem. I bet Angela is thrilled to be honored so sweetly by your words. And what a terrific picture of you two lovebirds, too! Very nicely done!

One teeny edit to make, though: in the second stanza, you don't need the apostrophe in the word "its."

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2019
    Thank you for the review and advice, I will correct the grammatical error. God's Blessings to you .