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Dawn of Chaos

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Comment from 24chas
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I liked this read, TPAC. You really built up the emotion in this piece. An uncomfortable feeling of something about to happen that's not good. Nice job.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    A life in hell, thinking all endure such aspects some more perceptive to them, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from meeshu
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this is a very unnerving piece of writing, TPAC. you bring forth an unknown emotion, is it dread? is it anticipation? does fate have a face? excellent...................meeshu

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    My interests the state of the dead, seeing perhaps their flesh less souls living with us, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.