Do You Snore?
a bored mind roams59 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
This is a most sensuous poem with a with a most sensuous lady that died too early. But the photo does fit the poem and the message very well. Imagination is either a way to escape for awhile, or... it's planning for the future. I enjoyed your poem and I wish you well.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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This is a most sensuous poem with a with a most sensuous lady that died too early. But the photo does fit the poem and the message very well. Imagination is either a way to escape for awhile, or... it's planning for the future. I enjoyed your poem and I wish you well.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Of course, you're most welcome.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
While the husband's snoring, the wife will go a roaming...oh dear!
I love the way you use few words in each line to get the message across...a seductive provocative style.
I enjoyed this expression... Complemented by Marilyn Munroe's picture. Effective.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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While the husband's snoring, the wife will go a roaming...oh dear!
I love the way you use few words in each line to get the message across...a seductive provocative style.
I enjoyed this expression... Complemented by Marilyn Munroe's picture. Effective.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from jmdg1954
VT... you got my interest piqued with the picture. You didn't disappoint with the poem. I found it well written, smooth flow and easily read.
Nicely created from start to completion.
John
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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VT... you got my interest piqued with the picture. You didn't disappoint with the poem. I found it well written, smooth flow and easily read.
Nicely created from start to completion.
John
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you, John.
Comment from geetha silvaratnam
A very well written poem and very creatively done. A bored wife, a scheming mind, a snoring husband and a mysterious neighbour. All nicely put together. Keep on writing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A very well written poem and very creatively done. A bored wife, a scheming mind, a snoring husband and a mysterious neighbour. All nicely put together. Keep on writing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, I couldn't resist, not with that artwork seducing my curious nature. And yet again, I am delighted I didn't resist. Your free verse has all the elements of a wonderful fantasy, and I bet there's not a woman who reads it who hasn't done something similar, or at least fantasized about it...
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Well, I couldn't resist, not with that artwork seducing my curious nature. And yet again, I am delighted I didn't resist. Your free verse has all the elements of a wonderful fantasy, and I bet there's not a woman who reads it who hasn't done something similar, or at least fantasized about it...
Comment Written 01-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Hi dear. Gosh, I've missed your reviews, light-heartedness, your intellect. Please stop by more often. Doug
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Thank you -- with such a reply, who wouldn't want to return? *grin* It was my pleasure. Sorry I've been negligent. :)
Comment from Malerie
Yes, mind tends to roam. This was funny as I read tb3 the title I thought this piece was just about a husband snorning. You made this a fun piece to read, I had a good chuckle. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Yes, mind tends to roam. This was funny as I read tb3 the title I thought this piece was just about a husband snorning. You made this a fun piece to read, I had a good chuckle. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from WildWithWords
A housewife lonely and bored with her sleeping husband, looking out the window and dreaming.... scheming.... the seduction of her neighbor. The whole poem in free verse is quite easy to follow and self-explanatory (thank you) and carries just the right combination of whimsical dream and suggestion of possible future reality.
The chosen art work is perfect in that it is both relevant and shows the sensual temptress side of the woman indeed exists in her physical look - her ample breasts all but revealed.
Nice work.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A housewife lonely and bored with her sleeping husband, looking out the window and dreaming.... scheming.... the seduction of her neighbor. The whole poem in free verse is quite easy to follow and self-explanatory (thank you) and carries just the right combination of whimsical dream and suggestion of possible future reality.
The chosen art work is perfect in that it is both relevant and shows the sensual temptress side of the woman indeed exists in her physical look - her ample breasts all but revealed.
Nice work.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from 24chas
I really liked this write, Victortouche. You cracked off some great lines in this one. Loved the hips walking a sensuous mile. Great stuff. Nice job of writing.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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I really liked this write, Victortouche. You cracked off some great lines in this one. Loved the hips walking a sensuous mile. Great stuff. Nice job of writing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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ha. I thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Do You Snore?", is an extremely well-written and semi erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. You KEEP READING and I'll KEEP WRITING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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"Do You Snore?", is an extremely well-written and semi erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I only have fives left. You KEEP READING and I'll KEEP WRITING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Ha ha. Most certainly, my Lady.
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Ha ha to you Sir.
Take care and God bless you,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. My husband has sleep apnea. Before he was diagnosed, I never got any sleep because of his horrible snoring. Not only me, but anybody trying to sleep in the house got none. Your poem is well written.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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I enjoyed reading your poem. My husband has sleep apnea. Before he was diagnosed, I never got any sleep because of his horrible snoring. Not only me, but anybody trying to sleep in the house got none. Your poem is well written.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you.
