Cut the Cord
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Comment from Heather Knight
I love this poem. It's easy to read, it flows fast and it's very encouraging and positive.
You don't even need artwork to make it attractive.
I have enjoyed reading it very much.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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I love this poem. It's easy to read, it flows fast and it's very encouraging and positive.
You don't even need artwork to make it attractive.
I have enjoyed reading it very much.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the kind and encouraging words and for all the stars.
dp
Comment from lyenochka
Great job on the poem as your notes describes quite a challenge to write this. I like the message of your poem which urges the reader to take courage and be bold to take on new adventures.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Great job on the poem as your notes describes quite a challenge to write this. I like the message of your poem which urges the reader to take courage and be bold to take on new adventures.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments and the high rating.
Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem is very uplifting, encouraging the reader to tear
down the barriers--most of which we build ourselves--that keep us from being
our best.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem is very uplifting, encouraging the reader to tear
down the barriers--most of which we build ourselves--that keep us from being
our best.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the nice review. I always try to use the least amount of words to convey my thoughts. Sometimes it doesn't work. I am glad you thought it did this time.
dragonpoet
Comment from susand3022
Hi Dragonpoet, This is a very nice interpretation of the title you chose to write. I like the way you made it all about growing up... I probably would have gone the same route as my son just turned 18 and is graduating high school this year. I also love the way you made it so non-restrictive. :) A nice write :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Hi Dragonpoet, This is a very nice interpretation of the title you chose to write. I like the way you made it all about growing up... I probably would have gone the same route as my son just turned 18 and is graduating high school this year. I also love the way you made it so non-restrictive. :) A nice write :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
dragonpoet
Comment from Yvon
A nice gallant piece of poetry. We all need to rise higher and ly in the Divine Cool Breeze. Third line 'Cross the ford."
Maybe should be "Cross the fiord?" Deals with water. creek inlet etc.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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A nice gallant piece of poetry. We all need to rise higher and ly in the Divine Cool Breeze. Third line 'Cross the ford."
Maybe should be "Cross the fiord?" Deals with water. creek inlet etc.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the kind comments and all the stars.
dragonpoet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Cut the Cord", is a well-written and thought-provoking piece.This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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"Cut the Cord", is a well-written and thought-provoking piece.This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Thanks for this kind and encouraging review.
Joan
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A well written poem with a string message. I think some artwork would enhace the poem for the reader. This could've easily been a free verse but I'm very happy that you included excellent rhyming. Good work!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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A well written poem with a string message. I think some artwork would enhace the poem for the reader. This could've easily been a free verse but I'm very happy that you included excellent rhyming. Good work!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging remarks and high rating. Both are much appreciated.
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Comment from Artasylum
This was sooo good dragonpoet... I will do just as you instruct and seek out endless possibilities... always enjoy your words and thanks so much for another good poem... yours, diana
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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This was sooo good dragonpoet... I will do just as you instruct and seek out endless possibilities... always enjoy your words and thanks so much for another good poem... yours, diana
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thanks for such positive reinforcement in this review, Diana
Joan
Comment from Miss Sherry
This is very nice! I did find one tiny nit...in the first stanza, line 4, should be "no river's too wide" Too means in excess.
To cut the cord - what a fine idea. Sometimes we become staid and fixed in our routines, which can lead to a darkening of the spirit, so you have given us the perfect idea - go, fly and expand! Very good poetry.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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This is very nice! I did find one tiny nit...in the first stanza, line 4, should be "no river's too wide" Too means in excess.
To cut the cord - what a fine idea. Sometimes we become staid and fixed in our routines, which can lead to a darkening of the spirit, so you have given us the perfect idea - go, fly and expand! Very good poetry.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the close scrutiny to find the error. I made the correction.
Joan
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I do not review lightly - I want to savor each read and as an editor in private, I notice things. Your work is lovely!!
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Thanks again. I am honored by your comments.
Joan
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My joy!!
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Glad you feel that way.
Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem inspired by the chosen title. It seems the poem flow naturally from the one thought to the next to form a wonderful unique poem.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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A very well-written poem inspired by the chosen title. It seems the poem flow naturally from the one thought to the next to form a wonderful unique poem.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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I am glad you found the ideas flowed well. Thanks for the review.
Joan
