Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is very cleverly written. I like you foreshadowing, and your irony. I enjoyed how you worked a plot into the plot. Very amusing. And just like the romance books themselves this was intentionally predictable. Having the character description in the beginning was helpful. The characters were true to your description. I could easily see this as a play. Well done and I am voting for this.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019

Hi Liz O'Neill!

Thank you so much for your kind comments and your feedback. I'm glad the character description in the beginning was helpful. I learned to do this feature from reading about writing plays. The list is called character personae. Thank you for taking the time to read my play and vote for it. I appreciate it so much.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is a sweet romance play in which you've woven in bits of a novel with a pretty hilarious title: "The Good, the Bad and the Next Door Neighbor!" I liked the love of reading theme but wasn't quite sure what was abandoned.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019

Hi Iyenochka!

Thank you for your kind comments. The bookcase was abandoned by the previous owner. It was in the beginning of the play. Again, thank you for taking the time to read my play.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

This is really lovely and I enjoyed reading it. I picked up a couple of points.

She nodded her ascent to Peter's request - 'ascent' should be 'assent'

MARA: (She smiles.) I'd love to you. And you just gave me an idea, neighbor. Delete 'to'

ANTHONY: Shall be skip the sorting and have lunch at Bright's Caf�?�©? 'be' should be 'we' and you might want to edit Caf�?�©. I've had this happen too. I don't know how you get accents to work on this site.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019

Hi JudyE!

Thank you for your great feedback and kind comments. I'm so glad you took the time to read my play. Thanks again.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author,

Interesting read and a great contest entry. Good luck!

Just a couple of offetings for your consideration:

"master's degree in creating writing. "

Masters programs are "creative" writing.

and

"and she wanted it to envelope her forever. "

I believe you meant to say "envelop."

Thanks so much for shariing.

Jan

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019

Hi HealingMuse!

Thank you for your feedback and the good luck wishes. I appreciate you taking the time to read my play. Thanks again.

reply by HealingMuse on 27-Feb-2019

My pleasure!