Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Welcome to My Darkness?"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- from ghosts of the past to the angel of death then to a dentist's assistant's nightmare...this is a very unique write that seems to wonder in the darkness. Certainly a one-of-a-kind offering for the evening.... ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Wow -- from ghosts of the past to the angel of death then to a dentist's assistant's nightmare...this is a very unique write that seems to wonder in the darkness. Certainly a one-of-a-kind offering for the evening.... ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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You are only limited by your Imagination.
Walt Disney.
Thanks,
Doc Rick
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
OH RICKY I'M SO GLAD I READ THIS
YOU HAVE DONE A FINE JOB AGAIN AND AGAIN
MY LAST SIX I KNEW I HELD ONTO IT FOR A REASON
ANOTHER FINE ENTRY BY DR. RICKY
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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OH RICKY I'M SO GLAD I READ THIS
YOU HAVE DONE A FINE JOB AGAIN AND AGAIN
MY LAST SIX I KNEW I HELD ONTO IT FOR A REASON
ANOTHER FINE ENTRY BY DR. RICKY
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Ahhh...
Your a Doll!
Ricky..
Comment from tbacha58
"And slowly...
"Ever so slowly...
"Moving...
"Human Not...
"As the Coffins Lid is closing now...
"Just look what I've got?"
"And, welcome...
"Welcome to My Darkness!"
Approximate Word Count: 383.
Again, Ricky, I am so sad with you about all the sadness of losing your beloved son. I am concerned about your suicide attempts, please don't do that, as he can maybe see you or hear. Stay here for his sake and the rest of your kids. Love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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"And slowly...
"Ever so slowly...
"Moving...
"Human Not...
"As the Coffins Lid is closing now...
"Just look what I've got?"
"And, welcome...
"Welcome to My Darkness!"
Approximate Word Count: 383.
Again, Ricky, I am so sad with you about all the sadness of losing your beloved son. I am concerned about your suicide attempts, please don't do that, as he can maybe see you or hear. Stay here for his sake and the rest of your kids. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thanks Terry and Jounaling these things actually helps a lot and may help others...
Thanks,
Ricky...
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this poem. I enjoy reading your work. I like the multiple presentation augmentations here: the illustration, the black background, and the colored font. I might suggest making the font a little larger, but I do like the color.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thank you for sharing this poem. I enjoy reading your work. I like the multiple presentation augmentations here: the illustration, the black background, and the colored font. I might suggest making the font a little larger, but I do like the color.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thanks Randal.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment from kiwijenny
This made me cry Ricky. My husband preached about suicide on Sunday. We've been rocked in our community with young men taking their life and a near miss as a hanging was stopped. Thank you for your poem. Scott begged people listening to talk to somebody. That this was NOT God's plan. He promises and His promises are true. Rely on God our Creator and Saviour
God bless
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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This made me cry Ricky. My husband preached about suicide on Sunday. We've been rocked in our community with young men taking their life and a near miss as a hanging was stopped. Thank you for your poem. Scott begged people listening to talk to somebody. That this was NOT God's plan. He promises and His promises are true. Rely on God our Creator and Saviour
God bless
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Have him recite this it's for everybody going through similar experiences.
Thanks,
Ricky...
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Thank you
