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The Trial

Not far from reality.

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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This piece of flash fiction depicts a scene that may someday be reality. Already,
Christians are called haters for simply quoting the Bible, on some hot-button topics in particular! Suggestion: I'd probably use "comprised" instead of "compiled."

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments. Yes, this is a reality not far from us. I changed compiled to comprised as you suggested. Thanks so much!
    All my best,
    Sally
reply by Janice Canerdy on 01-Mar-2019
    You're quite welcome! :-)
Comment from kiwijenny
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Sally this is so close to my heart. I am a Christian , a preacher's wife. I can see this happening. It's very close to home. My husband preaches the whole counsel of God and he loves people. It could happen to us very easily
God bless

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2019
    Thank you, dear Jenny. It is a shocking article, but really, the chance of this happening is at our door. Christians and our esteemed values have been under assault for years now and it has escalated in the last two years. Look what is happening with abortion, now legal to full term in several states and more desiring to make it a state law. My post is not far fetched?at all.
    All my best,
    Sal xo
reply by kiwijenny on 02-Mar-2019
    My book Leafed Branched and Rooted is about forgiveness...it?s a series and the forgiveness will happen in book three..I want that for children more than anything ...hugs
Comment from country ranch writer
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Our freedom is on the line and we still have to defend it a s per usual. People want to take our religion away because they fear our. For God'sake we all pray to the same God just in different ways.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much dear Barbara. I read where progressivism is now a religion. Hollow with false Gods all over. I appreciate your himest and candid feedback.
    All my best,
    Sal xo
Comment from meeshu
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one would like to think we have progressed since the Inquisition. and we have despite the occasional sojourn in Salem, Berlin and Tehran. to name a few. constant vigilance, Sal..........................meeshu

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments, Gary. One would think...but I see the wind shifting here in the land of the free, free for some, but conservatives and Christians are loosing ground by the day. Jesus said it would be like this shortly before His return.
    All my best,
    Sal :+)
reply by meeshu on 27-Feb-2019
    He did.
Comment from jmshumate
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Thank you for sharing this bit of flash fiction. It is well written and really a reality in some places in the world. Heads are rolling somewhere today guaranteed. Hopefully, we are able to continue to have religious freedom here in the US. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments.Yes, my son was in China for a year and it is far worse there and many other nations. We are going to be tasting more and more. Christian hatred is rising in the United States, even those with conservative values are feeling it, too.
    All my best,
    Sal :+)
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good read, Sally. It was chilling and I know where you're coming from. It seems like the more progressive society gets, the less freedoms we have. Nice job.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and for getting me. It good to write to those who will understand this, not everyone will. I appreciate you, Chas.
    All my best,
    Sal :+)
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a sad commentary on what we as Christians are beginning to experience and it will probably get worse.
Blessings to you. Patricia

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Yes, it is moving quickly in this direction. Even those with values are feeling it.
    All my best,
    Sal :+)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a shocking write Sally, especially since America is considered the most democratic society in the world, I'm not sure what has happened recently to inspire this write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you Dolly for the excellent review and insight. It is shocking, but Christians have increasingly become the brunt of jokes on television, called into question for the esteemed values. Late night television and talk shows are the worst. At colleges and universities, conservative speakers are shut down and not permitted to speak at lectures. Radical democrats are calling for the harassment of anyone who voted for Trump. Young Catholic high school boys were just on the news and now proven to be innocent of any wrongdoing. Simply wearing a MAGA cap. Yet, actors and media personalities are still harassing them. This is just a few things in recent weeks.

    Gladys Knight was called into question for singing the national anthem! Good grief...

    Thanks for reading and reviewing.
    All my best,
    Sal xo
Comment from royowen
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Yes, I must agree with you Sally, the march towards ultimate persecution is upon us. Jesus said, "If they persecuted me, they will persecute you." John 15:20, well done my friend, keep talking, someone will hear. Well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you Roy. I knew you would get this. Every nation is seeing this. Jesus said it would excellerate before He returned. We are closing in to those days described in the Bible. Even those with conservative values are feeling it.
    All my best,
    Sal :+)
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Sal. How are you? I like this flash story, but to be honest with you, I do not see the point. forgive my ignorance, will you, please. Are you saying that if one believes in God, they are guilty of something? LOL See, I do not get it. Unless you ae saying that christians are in the minority and are intrusive to society, as such and deserve punishment?

By the way, my understanding is the words "God" and "Jesus" should always be capitalized.

Bless you, my friend. Bob

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Bob. Although fiction, this is coming from a place very real to me. We are moving quickly to the day when Christians and the values we hold will be ?deplorable? to the world. I think I was called that in 2016. Just recently, Catholic high school students verbally defamed by the mainstream media for wearing a MAGA cap. Even after the video showed clearly there was no wrongdoing, the media and Hollywood actors continued to try to ruin them. These are high school students, attacked verbally by adults who know better. Politicians calling for the harassment of Trump supporters. Conservative speakers banned from college campuses. Is this not the land of free speech, even for a conservative? It is not looking good for the Christian here in America, growing worse by the day. Even my conservative friends who are not Christians, but hold values, feel it.

    I used the term so-called god as a secular view of A god, not THE Almighty God. This court in this future scene does not recognize the Almighty God. I did go back and capitalize it, as I did not want to offend anyone or my Lord. Thank you for that input.

    All my best,
    Sal,+)

reply by Mastery on 27-Feb-2019
    :) Bob