Unintentional
Teacup Dictionary contest19 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congratulations on your second place finish, Chip -- great job!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for joining in the fun with the rest of us - great times had by reviewers and contestants alike! ;) ;) Take care! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Congratulations on your second place finish, Chip -- great job!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for joining in the fun with the rest of us - great times had by reviewers and contestants alike! ;) ;) Take care! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Yvette, that was an entertaining one! You didn't win, so I'm guessing you didn't enter;^)
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Chip, some times things just happen...
doesn't always mean it was done on purpose...
very well written...and the picture speaks for itself...
love you poem my sweet friend...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Hi Chip, some times things just happen...
doesn't always mean it was done on purpose...
very well written...and the picture speaks for itself...
love you poem my sweet friend...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Much appreciated, as always, Linda!
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and you are soooo welcome always Chip...love xxoo
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Reading through these entries and so far, yours is my favorite. It's simple, clear and relatable and not trying overly hard to be fancy or more than it is. I like it! Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Reading through these entries and so far, yours is my favorite. It's simple, clear and relatable and not trying overly hard to be fancy or more than it is. I like it! Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Robyn, I appreciate it! (hope you voted;^)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I like your use of slang terms with the line, "my bad" and the wordplay with the common saying"to err is human." A good topic to address for this contest. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I like your use of slang terms with the line, "my bad" and the wordplay with the common saying"to err is human." A good topic to address for this contest. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Cindy!
Comment from Kimberly Maschi
Humorous and story told. Good picture combined with the poem, really yelled HUH? Clever use of the syllable structure. I would have liked the last sentence to tie in more to the beginning word. I have notice that a lot of these teacup poems in this contest rely on some cliche saying. I think the sentence, if changed, would really bring this poem over the top.
Kim
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Humorous and story told. Good picture combined with the poem, really yelled HUH? Clever use of the syllable structure. I would have liked the last sentence to tie in more to the beginning word. I have notice that a lot of these teacup poems in this contest rely on some cliche saying. I think the sentence, if changed, would really bring this poem over the top.
Kim
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Kimberly.
Comment from LisaMay
Your teacup entry is, I feel, the most successfully realised one.... innovative definitions and it has kept a teacup shape, unlike some of the other entries.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Your teacup entry is, I feel, the most successfully realised one.... innovative definitions and it has kept a teacup shape, unlike some of the other entries.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Lisa! (then I have your vote?;^)
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Yes indeed.. I voted for it straight after reviewing. I see that abracadabra is pipping you by one vote so far... hopefully more voters will get on board with yours.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well we all make mistakes and if we apologise and learn from them then they are not in vain, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a sweet teacup,love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Well we all make mistakes and if we apologise and learn from them then they are not in vain, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a sweet teacup,love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is absolutely terrific! I'm new to this style of poetry, and it's a really good challenge! But you nailed it. The picture's cute, too. Great job with all of it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This is absolutely terrific! I'm new to this style of poetry, and it's a really good challenge! But you nailed it. The picture's cute, too. Great job with all of it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I appreciate it, Rachelle!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Teacup Dictionary Poem.
You have fit the form of the poem into your story nicely.
Well done and good luck to you.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Teacup Dictionary Poem.
You have fit the form of the poem into your story nicely.
Well done and good luck to you.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Sharon!
Comment from Miss Sherry
Good luck in this contest! It is very cute, as is your photo guy. I need to try this and enter contest. Great entry - a real gem.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Good luck in this contest! It is very cute, as is your photo guy. I need to try this and enter contest. Great entry - a real gem.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Sherry! I look forward to your entry if you decide to.
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Thank you, oh mysterious one!
