Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Craig, well done on this short 5-7-5 that uses this form to decry the ungodliness in the life of Cardinal Pell. Your verse makes a dramatic impact and your notes add depth too. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019

Thanks, Melissa. There was a bit of disbelief when news of the conviction came out. Not because people didn't believe the accusations, but because they didn't believe the cover-ups would fail. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

Disgusting, isn't it? And people go on about 'immigrants'. I swear it's because they are forced to lead unnatural lives of abstinence, not that this is any excuse. Anyway. a neat verse drawing attention to something we should all be aware of.

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Emma. Disgusting barely begins to describe it. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This write may shock a few people but everyone needs to be shocked and take notice here as these sins have gone virtually undetected for years behind closed doors where many children have suffered, well said, a poignant and powerful write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019

Thanks so much, Dolly. As horrendous as the extent of the revelations so far is, I think many believe it's just the tip of the iceberg. Most grateful, Craig