Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Chapter Four, Part 1"It was their world long before our existence...
19 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
An excellent connecting chapter. I like the updated tech stuff. I'm not very good at that kind of thing so always admire anyone who can weave it into a story so naturally. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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An excellent connecting chapter. I like the updated tech stuff. I'm not very good at that kind of thing so always admire anyone who can weave it into a story so naturally. :-)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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I'm trying to keep up with it because of my students - lol!! ;) :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This story is really suspenseful. Love it. And now we are onto the solution of finding the woman and child. But when in the story does this happen....
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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This story is really suspenseful. Love it. And now we are onto the solution of finding the woman and child. But when in the story does this happen....
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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So glad you're enjoying being 'suspensed'... :) :) :)
Comment from Sankey
Another interesting chapter with more persons to meet. Loved the following and I know what you mean..."Again with the air quotes." Fingers in the air for expression marks, right?
One spag.
Out (of)the corner of his eye,
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Another interesting chapter with more persons to meet. Loved the following and I know what you mean..."Again with the air quotes." Fingers in the air for expression marks, right?
One spag.
Out (of)the corner of his eye,
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Correct, sir!! :) ;) And thanx for the spag! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from JudyE
I haven't found any discrepancies. Everything is fitting together nicely.
One small point:
Stephen had taken the pause to put another large bite in his mouth - I might have said 'taken a pause'.
Best wishes
Judy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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I haven't found any discrepancies. Everything is fitting together nicely.
One small point:
Stephen had taken the pause to put another large bite in his mouth - I might have said 'taken a pause'.
Best wishes
Judy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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And it looks like your getting caught up now... hooray!! I'm so very thankful for all your help, Judy -- you ROCK!! :) ;)
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I've always wanted to rock!! And you're welcome.
Comment from F. Wehr3
I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but I wanted to see more of your work. I enjoyed this (even if I was more than a bit confused) story and complexity of the of the missing girl's scenario.. Looking forward to more.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but I wanted to see more of your work. I enjoyed this (even if I was more than a bit confused) story and complexity of the of the missing girl's scenario.. Looking forward to more.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Be my guest, sir, to drop in to my portfolio with your morning coffee or your evening snifter and have a look...Maggie would love to have you catch upon what's going on! ;) ;) Take care and thanx for the review! :) :) Yvette
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Yvette,
What an intriguing chapter! And so very nicely written, as always. A delightful read.
OK -- two things: 1.) You have me hooked on this story, and 2.) Damn! I really want some root bear. Ha ha ha!
Just a couple of little things to offer here:
"I'm sure she's moved and just neglected to change her address in bank records."
I think this needs either "her" (bank records) or "with her bank." Something like that, I think, might make this sentence flow more easily.
Farther down, businessmen should be one word.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Hi Yvette,
What an intriguing chapter! And so very nicely written, as always. A delightful read.
OK -- two things: 1.) You have me hooked on this story, and 2.) Damn! I really want some root bear. Ha ha ha!
Just a couple of little things to offer here:
"I'm sure she's moved and just neglected to change her address in bank records."
I think this needs either "her" (bank records) or "with her bank." Something like that, I think, might make this sentence flow more easily.
Farther down, businessmen should be one word.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2019
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Thanx so much for those catches, Jan -- I am so glad you all keep me straight in the details department....I do better with those in the Summer (no classes!) - so appreciated!! ;) ;) And I'm so glad you're hooked ... working to get the next one out early this coming week, but I am setting no deadline at this point...veeery full plate I am working to 'clear' or, at the very least, 'unclutter'. :) ;) Thanx for the smile in your words too -- please know that they made their way through the cloud! ;) ;) Take care in Memphis! ;)
Comment from kiwijenny
Ive missed a lot of the story...none of the names seem familiar..
But it is intriguing nonetheless...how today people can go off the grid because everything is done remotely...
I homeschooled my kids...good curriculum I thought
God bless
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Ive missed a lot of the story...none of the names seem familiar..
But it is intriguing nonetheless...how today people can go off the grid because everything is done remotely...
I homeschooled my kids...good curriculum I thought
God bless
Comment Written 27-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019
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Thanx for dropping by, Jenny -- appreciate your giving this one a second set of eyes for me --- always good to hear from you! ;) ;) Take care and have a great rest of the week! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Longer but so enjoyable Yvette. It was interesting to be able to trace the whereabouts off Maddie and Addy and follow their path through their history. You did a great job describing the events and challenges they face while still maintaining a conversation between Geoffrey and Stephen over their dinner. Very well done.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Longer but so enjoyable Yvette. It was interesting to be able to trace the whereabouts off Maddie and Addy and follow their path through their history. You did a great job describing the events and challenges they face while still maintaining a conversation between Geoffrey and Stephen over their dinner. Very well done.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed, Ali -- I really cannot find enough hours in the days this week to give myself a break to write...once I make it through third quarter exams this week and grading them this weekend I really want to take more time to WRITE (not poetry but WRITE!). I'm just chasing my tail these days and it's making me crazy!! ;) ;) Thanx so much for hanging in there with me and for keeping up with Maggie and the Refuge Gang! ;) :) Take care out there! ;) ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette.
Comment from royowen
In trying to locate an orphan called Addison who had vanished when the authorities had come to pick him up. And Maggie had vanished with him. A panther named bongo was kind ing with. So Stephen was on the case, I'm trying to get the the connection between, Dorothy, Maghie the boy and the refuge Yvette, but well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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In trying to locate an orphan called Addison who had vanished when the authorities had come to pick him up. And Maggie had vanished with him. A panther named bongo was kind ing with. So Stephen was on the case, I'm trying to get the the connection between, Dorothy, Maghie the boy and the refuge Yvette, but well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Maggie is the niece of Rosemary (the deceased Guardian of the Refuge) -- the one that Rosemary willed everything to. Geoffrey is tasked to find Maggie as he was/is Rosemary's attorney and tasked with carrying out the conditions of her will. Stephen is Geoffrey's private investigator. Addy's living with Maggie (remember from the first few parts of the book) -- Dorothy was raising them both,but died of cancer. That's the best I've got without giving away anything...hope that helps, sir! ;) :) Thanx so much for hanging in there! ;) ;) Yvette
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I already knew most of it, but got a little
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I already knew most of it, but got a little separated from the early chapters,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter and the missing girl they need to find quickly so that she can take up her inheritance that she deserved after all the years that she had no loving home.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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A very well-written chapter and the missing girl they need to find quickly so that she can take up her inheritance that she deserved after all the years that she had no loving home.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Good evening, Sandra! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed this latest installment -- always so good of you to stop by and check on Maggie and the gang! :) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
