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Owe Deer! Hoo Gnu?!

Anne interruption wile righting a homonym poem

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Your Woes of Homonyms verse is a good entry for the contest.
You've certainly displayed what Homonyms are and the confusion they can cause.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Eye appreciate yore comments, Sharon! Thank ewe!
Comment from Joanna S. Blue
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You had fun with this and it is great fun to read. Your poems show originality and humor. I'm not sure about whir/were and watt/what. That's a close call. I considered this contest, and couldn't think how to begin.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Yore rite; those too whir a little dicey! xo
Comment from RodG
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There are not many homonyms you did not use inthis contest entry. The poor poet was interrupted by a four-legged guest that ultimately became her dinner. Amusing use of the wrong words.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    That'll teach that varmint!!
    Thank ewe for the review, RodG!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Rachelle, this is delightfully fun and so cute to read. I really enjoyed going along and figuring out the words you meant (phonetically written... well done). Great job and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank ewe, Surgarray! Eye appreciate the feedback! xo
Comment from Debra White
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Hi Rachelle :)
I enjoyed this a lot!
A very clever write that tickled my funny bone!
I especially enjoyed the ending... very satisfying, as per the stew!
Good luck in the voting booth :)
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank ewe, Debra!!! Eye appreciate it! xo
Comment from judiverse
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This is great fun. Excellent work, and you brought in so many homonyms. Great job with the rhyme, too. Okay, you can stop with the homonyms after you've written your poem! Best of luck in the contest, and let me no if you've one. This should do great in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    That was the problem! After I finished, I could NOT stop conjuring them up with every word I wrote. I finally had to step away from the computer and just play piano until I felt better!!
Comment from Janet Foor
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This is a clever, creative and fun poem for the homonym contest complete with a story. I think you met the requirement of the contest and then some.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    That's me - always the over-achievuh!! xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This made me smile, I loved the spelling of the words with mixed up meanings, very unusual and he sentiment of humour which was most unexpected at the end! A gem of a write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank, ewe vary mush, Dolly! Eye appreciate your kind words. xo
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 25-Feb-2019
    Perfikct x
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Rachelle. LOL I love the way you handled these words, my friend. Quite frankly, I have never heard of such a poetry form before. Honestly.

"Then the next thing that Aye gnu,
Eye could here hymn shout, "Yew who!"

Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank ewe, Bob! Eye yam happy to here this.

    I'd never heard of this form of poetry, either...and quite honestly, I hope I never do again because it sent me over the edge for the remainder of the night after I'd submitted it. Every last word I wrote, I re-imagined in my head as a homonym. I finally just had to get away from the computer and play piano! Oy!!
reply by Mastery on 25-Feb-2019
    Amen. I understand. :) Bob
Comment from Dawn Munro
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LOL. This was a delight. I can picture that scene you paint with your (silly) words, and what words they are! If ever I need an example of homonyms, I couldn't go wrong with your fun poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
    Thank ewe, Dawn! Eye yam glad yew liked it!
reply by Dawn Munro on 25-Feb-2019
    LOL. My pleasure!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019