"Amazing!" #1. 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Blend?"New Book of Poetry.
6 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi Ricky... I'm going to say, and very first thing... you have a rage on about this picture... I am still struggling about what a sideways blurry photo of a man hs to do with the changing colors of the sky has to do with each other... I think you could have done tons better with that one... but it isn't what I'm here to comment about and 'grade' you on... That would be the poem, which I find really quite nice. It has a nice progression, especially on the second read. I really like things you have to read twice. Sometimes when you have to read something just once and it's more than just a little short thing I find it kind of boring. Nice to find someone who isn't boring. :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Hi Ricky... I'm going to say, and very first thing... you have a rage on about this picture... I am still struggling about what a sideways blurry photo of a man hs to do with the changing colors of the sky has to do with each other... I think you could have done tons better with that one... but it isn't what I'm here to comment about and 'grade' you on... That would be the poem, which I find really quite nice. It has a nice progression, especially on the second read. I really like things you have to read twice. Sometimes when you have to read something just once and it's more than just a little short thing I find it kind of boring. Nice to find someone who isn't boring. :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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The picture is My Friend Joe.
He knew not of it.
I picked it for presentation reasons.
He seemed to be telling the story with his hand motions
He also was very good looking when he was younger.
His Italian Look.
He was often mistaken for Oates of the group Hall and Oates.
Also Carlos Santana from Black Sabbath.
Also he was given a Bit Role in "West Side Story"
And a Movie with Burt Lancaster in the movie "The Cape Man"
Both Gang Related
Glad though you enjoyed my work instead of "Ugly Joe!"
Comment from Randa Dayle
Aren't colors amazing. What a boring world this would be without them. Lots of insight in this poem, and your feelings and love for the Lord shine forth!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Aren't colors amazing. What a boring world this would be without them. Lots of insight in this poem, and your feelings and love for the Lord shine forth!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks Miss Randa.
Doc Ric
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
This one is really out there my friend! You operate on a whole other plain with some really wild concepts! Seems like a drug induced inspiration as I could read this over and over and still not necessarily make heads or tales of this so perhaps this is the objective? I like how you end it as is this just a dream? blend? Because dreams can go all over the place with different scenes and ideas. It made me think, that's for sure.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This one is really out there my friend! You operate on a whole other plain with some really wild concepts! Seems like a drug induced inspiration as I could read this over and over and still not necessarily make heads or tales of this so perhaps this is the objective? I like how you end it as is this just a dream? blend? Because dreams can go all over the place with different scenes and ideas. It made me think, that's for sure.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks again.
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Comment from QC Poet
Interesting comments on the subject matter and detailed nicely composed writing about the subject matter colors descriptive with flowing theme. You may want to put the author and description of the work in the notes section instead of the poem writing it's self. A suggestion only.
Good Luck
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Interesting comments on the subject matter and detailed nicely composed writing about the subject matter colors descriptive with flowing theme. You may want to put the author and description of the work in the notes section instead of the poem writing it's self. A suggestion only.
Good Luck
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment from kiwijenny
I loved this..I was an art teacher for years. Colors blend is so cool to speak from the colors perspective. Orange ...now that's the most suspect color all liquored up on tangerine tea...lol
Well penned and of course God has even more gorgeous colors for us in heaven
God bless
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I loved this..I was an art teacher for years. Colors blend is so cool to speak from the colors perspective. Orange ...now that's the most suspect color all liquored up on tangerine tea...lol
Well penned and of course God has even more gorgeous colors for us in heaven
God bless
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks Miss Kiwi!
Ricky...
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very intriguing piece that attributes the colors of the rainbow to activities and aspects of man and reserves for God and heavenly beings the colors of silver and gold - interesting phrasings and imagery! Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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A very intriguing piece that attributes the colors of the rainbow to activities and aspects of man and reserves for God and heavenly beings the colors of silver and gold - interesting phrasings and imagery! Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks Yvette.
My next post...
"What's My Name?"
Will make you?
Dr.Ricky
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