"Amazing!" #1. 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Don't You Know?"New Book of Poetry.
5 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
You have and use a lot of thought provoking words. Your writings are unique as I thought it was interesting the stirring of the stew as the conversation flowed. I like the line when the boy said I want to be like you but then the father answered to be yourself.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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You have and use a lot of thought provoking words. Your writings are unique as I thought it was interesting the stirring of the stew as the conversation flowed. I like the line when the boy said I want to be like you but then the father answered to be yourself.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment from Mistydawn
What a sad poem. Your great word choice lets the reader feel your pain, agony on every line.
I know this isn't a lot of comfort, but know that your son is in a much better place. I do hope this poem gets more people interested in organ donation.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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What a sad poem. Your great word choice lets the reader feel your pain, agony on every line.
I know this isn't a lot of comfort, but know that your son is in a much better place. I do hope this poem gets more people interested in organ donation.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks Misty.
"What's My Name?"
Just posted...
Will make you cry.
Kiss your child before reviewing
Dr.Ricky
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Comment from Randa Dayle
What a sad experience to write about, but you did it so well. Thanks for sharing your writing, and opening your heart to us. Nice poem, you write very well.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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What a sad experience to write about, but you did it so well. Thanks for sharing your writing, and opening your heart to us. Nice poem, you write very well.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks Randa.
Dr.Ricky
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Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Ricky1024. It seemed very bittersweet and with some great lines in it. It captured my attention right at the beginning and had a good flow all the way through. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Ricky1024. It seemed very bittersweet and with some great lines in it. It captured my attention right at the beginning and had a good flow all the way through. Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thanks for this Chas.
Doctor Rocky
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Comment from tbacha58
"Firstly, I know You...
"And, even though...
"You may or may not remember...
"So...
"Lost afar in the **Glow."
"You know that You used to call Me...
"Daddy"
(Stirring the Stew)
Here you are weeping so deeply, that you are breaking your heart for that little boy, adorable, which you have not seen in a long time, but you talk to him every minute you are alive. So sorry Ricky I wish it was different. Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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"Firstly, I know You...
"And, even though...
"You may or may not remember...
"So...
"Lost afar in the **Glow."
"You know that You used to call Me...
"Daddy"
(Stirring the Stew)
Here you are weeping so deeply, that you are breaking your heart for that little boy, adorable, which you have not seen in a long time, but you talk to him every minute you are alive. So sorry Ricky I wish it was different. Terry xoxo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thanks.
The deeper we go...
The better it gets?Ricky...
