Walk of Serenity
Only found in the silence of the night...13 total reviews
Comment from Chip Kuzborski
Lovely poem, Yvette, says a lot in so few words, powerful! Congrats on winning, hope you have an expansive display for your awards;^)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Lovely poem, Yvette, says a lot in so few words, powerful! Congrats on winning, hope you have an expansive display for your awards;^)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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LOL! ;) Thanx for dropping by on this one, Chip -- always appreciate hearing from you! ;) :) Have a great evening and enjoyable week ahead! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-3-2, Walk of Serenity, has the syllables set up correctly and puts the mind at a curious ease as teh mind finds the light in the darkness.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This 2-3-2, Walk of Serenity, has the syllables set up correctly and puts the mind at a curious ease as teh mind finds the light in the darkness.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanx for dropping in for this one, Bill -- much appreciated! ;) Have a great week ahead! :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your seven syllables are effectively used here to describe that rare moment
of peace in nature, accessible only when one is alone and the only sounds,
if any, come from nature.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Your seven syllables are effectively used here to describe that rare moment
of peace in nature, accessible only when one is alone and the only sounds,
if any, come from nature.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Good evening, Janice. Your comments indicate that you found no errors in the poem; however, the rating of 'four' is for a post that needs some mechanical or other corrections to bring it up to the standard of a 'five'. Could you please tell me what you would recommend changing or fixing so that next time I will have a better idea of how to construct a 2-3-2..? Thank you very much for your assistance. :) :)
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The 4 is a mistake! I intended to give a 5. I don't know how I managed that. I will change that rating. I'm glad you said something. Janice
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It's now a 5! :-)
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Thank you, Janice -- I'm one of those crazy people always looking to improve if I can but on a 2-3-2 I thought "Oh, no! What did I do on THAT one!?!" Thank you for clarifying and have a wonderful evening! ;) ;)
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You too!
Comment from seaglass
You just got my vote. I've been on a quest of peace and simplicity has been my solution. This is demonstrated in the picture representing this as well as the simple wording. Writing a meaningful poem with so few words is a challenge, but you nailed it.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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You just got my vote. I've been on a quest of peace and simplicity has been my solution. This is demonstrated in the picture representing this as well as the simple wording. Writing a meaningful poem with so few words is a challenge, but you nailed it.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for joining me on my peaceful nighttime walk, seaglass -- it thrills me to know that you truly enjoyed it! ;) You're welcome to tag along my walks any time! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening! ;) ;)
Comment from l.raven
for me I love the night...there is a peacefulness...not found in the day...you can walk and hear your heart beat in the silence of the night...very nicely written...and your picture speaks for itself...love you poem...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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for me I love the night...there is a peacefulness...not found in the day...you can walk and hear your heart beat in the silence of the night...very nicely written...and your picture speaks for itself...love you poem...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for joining me on my peaceful nighttime walk, Linda -- so glad you enjoyed! ;) You're welcome to tag along any time! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening! ;) ;)
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Hi Yvette, you are so very welcome sweet girl...and I enjoyed the walk...smiling back at you...and you have a wonderful evening as well...love xxoo
Comment from Coco Jane
Beautiful and peaceful. It makes me sigh. Good job of putting a lot into so few words.
The picture adds a lot too. It makes this look almost like a death--walking toward the light.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Beautiful and peaceful. It makes me sigh. Good job of putting a lot into so few words.
The picture adds a lot too. It makes this look almost like a death--walking toward the light.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for joining me on my peaceful nighttime walk, Coco -- so glad you enjoyed! ;) You're welcome to tag along any time! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening! ;) ;)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I can never get over how much can be conveyed in just seven syllables! This is a fantastic poem, and I love the graphic you chose to go with it. Good luck with this excellent entry. I bet you'll do very well.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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I can never get over how much can be conveyed in just seven syllables! This is a fantastic poem, and I love the graphic you chose to go with it. Good luck with this excellent entry. I bet you'll do very well.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much for joining me on my peaceful nighttime walk, Rachelle -- so glad you enjoyed! ;) You're welcome to tag along any time! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening! ;) ;)
Comment from jmshumate
This short poem is a good entry for this contest in my opinion. In so few syllables you describe a peaceful scene of a person walking through the peaceful night. Your picture works well with this poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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This short poem is a good entry for this contest in my opinion. In so few syllables you describe a peaceful scene of a person walking through the peaceful night. Your picture works well with this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Wow, JM
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Oh no! I was typing and then the computer blinked and then my typing was gone! :) ;) Okay, so, trying again here! :) You just made my night with those lovely stars, JM -- so very appreciated!! I am so glad you enjoyed my evening walk with me -- you're welcome to tag along any time! ;) ;) Have a wonderful evening wherever you are! ;) ;)
Comment from Dean Kuch
There are few things on earth that are more serene than a solitary walk through a dense copse of forest and trees in the wee hours of the early morning.
I do it every single day with Gidget, my grumpy old female Chihuahua.
In fact, we just got back about fifteen minutes ago. It made this review rather easy to write.
Nice 2-3-2 poem.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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There are few things on earth that are more serene than a solitary walk through a dense copse of forest and trees in the wee hours of the early morning.
I do it every single day with Gidget, my grumpy old female Chihuahua.
In fact, we just got back about fifteen minutes ago. It made this review rather easy to write.
Nice 2-3-2 poem.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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It thrills me to know that both you and the little lady with attitude enjoyed this one, Sir Dean!! :) ;) I wish I had a dog to take my morning walks with...:) Thanx so much for your review on this one, 2-4 -- appreciate your stopping by! ;) ;) Have a great evening! ;) ;)
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
A quite atmospheric piece this. Well done. By association - or default - I first read the second line as "...midnight's breath..." which works too.
It is very difficult to stand out in these short forms - which are always well contested - but I wish you well with this. As I say: it is atmospheric, which is something difficult to achieve in such a small place.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Hello Anon
A quite atmospheric piece this. Well done. By association - or default - I first read the second line as "...midnight's breath..." which works too.
It is very difficult to stand out in these short forms - which are always well contested - but I wish you well with this. As I say: it is atmospheric, which is something difficult to achieve in such a small place.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Wow, Phil -- your comments here mean more than you know, sir! ;) ;) Thanx so much for your review on this one -- appreciate your stopping by! ;) ;) Have a great evening! ;) ;)
