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Unconditional Love on a Full Stomach

Contest entry: 2-3-2

12 total reviews 
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Lisa,

Awwww - This is an adorable poem.and a great contest entry. I am not sure how I mossed this one for reviewing until.now. I hope you did well in.the voting.

Adorable image!

Thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
    No worries, thanks for reviewing whenever you get around to it s fine.... it's just nice to know your opinion as I trust your comments. I thought I might be in with a chance in the contest, but it only got 2 votes and came equal 6th.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-3-2, Unconditional Love on a Full Stomach, has the syllables set up correctly and sees the bond between cat and person who feeds cat.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
    Thanks for your review Bill.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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This title is fantastic! And, of course, who could resist that photograph? It's so hard to make a poem with such limited parameters, but you did it nicely! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
    The title is longer than the poem, so I got in a lot more message... bang for my buck.
    I've been noticing how many cat lovers write about their furry friends, so my poem is a shameless attempt at review-and-vote-garnering. I don't have the $$$ to entice them, but hopefully the cutie photo will draw them in. (I am a cat lover also; it is not entirely cynical.)
reply by Rachelle Allen on 23-Feb-2019
    Great strategy, you clever thing, you!! I love it!
Comment from Malerie
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Too cute. I don't have any pets but I know some pet love and they would share the same feeling you expressed. Nicely written, thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks for taking the time to review my poem Malerie... written with my cat on my lap.
reply by Malerie on 22-Feb-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Stars ******** for you. Yes, beautiful photo and great frisky pun.
I have five lap cats. They are great buddies when I am inside.
Kittens are so cute and fun to play with. Note your description is
wrong so flip your numbers to 2-3-2. Keep warm. We have 30 inches
of snow here in Minnesota. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reviewing, and major thanks for noting the error which I have now amended, and mega major thanks for the sweet sixer. It is summer here in NZ... I really do feel warm! Sorry you are suffering in 30 inches of snow.
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Writer
This is wonderful wordplay in the 2-3-2 poem
and an excellent entry for the contest
Excellent use of alliteration and sound
Nicely match to the photo
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much for the review. I wrote it while my cat was asleep on my lap, so she can claim being the muse for it.
Comment from 24chas
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This was a clever piece, unknown poet. I think any cat lover could appreciate your poem. It was well done and universal in appeal, at least as far as animal lovers go. Nice job.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reviewing this simple poem... the title is longer!
    I don't trust anyone who doesn't like animals.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a fun and cuddly offering for the contest -- who doesn't love a little kitty?! :) :) Be sure to pop back in there and fix the numbers on your title tag line -- best of luck at the polls! ;) :)

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks for spotting the numbers were wrong. An earlier reviewer mentioned it too, so all good now.
    There are lots of animal lovers on FS, I have a cat myself, so it seemed natural to write about one... especially as my own cat was sleeping on my lap at the time.
Comment from Miss Sherry
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Adorable!! I love doggie kisses or kitty kisses, or any other animal, except maybe alligator's, they always want to French kiss and I don't have enough bandaids for that. Such a cute kittie. I want another one but we have rules here. Someday in heaven, I will be a crazy cat lady and have all I want. Very sweet poem!!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reviewing Sherry. I think there is a special place in heaven for animal lovers, where even alligators can be trusted to kiss without losing your face. It's a pity about the rules not allowing a furry friend for you.
Comment from QC Poet
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Title says contest entry 3-2-3 it's
Actually 2-3-2 and a Format fitting and charming poem Per the contest . Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Thanks for pointing that out... i changed it a few minutes ago before reading your review. Thanks for your good wishes.