Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-3-2, Winter Vanishing, has the syllables set up correctly and paints a mucky picture of the break up when the cold moves out and the mud takes over.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019

Dear Bill, Thanks for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

I find this kind of poetry so difficult, yet with just three lines, you made my heart feel hopeful. Now THAT's talent!! And I love the photo you chose to go along with this. Perfect! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019

Dear Rachelle, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Hey -- it looks like our road out front....but, wait, it's not still raining in the picture!! ;) ;) LOL! :) A great offering for the contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019

Dear Y.M. Thanks for your comments and review. I'm sorry about the no rain, but that was the only picture I could find on Fan Art Review. I have trouble finding pictures on other sites, probably because I don't know how to get the picture onto my poem (e.g. from the Internet or Google or Pinterest).

Comment from RichardFann

Excellent

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Like the pic, the poem, and the layout.

Environmental green.

The passing of the seasons.

The character that changes.

The breath of fresh air that can now be taken.

Good luck,

Richard.


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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019

Dear Richard, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove