My Soul
A pure soul is heaven bound.5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This short poem reminds us of who created us and Who we will return to in the end if we believe and act appropriately.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
This short poem reminds us of who created us and Who we will return to in the end if we believe and act appropriately.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 18-Nov-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-3-2, My Soul, has the syllables set up correctly and connects the immortal soul with the 'finisher of our faith'. Nice.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
This 2-3-2, My Soul, has the syllables set up correctly and connects the immortal soul with the 'finisher of our faith'. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the compliment. This came from the heart and God's promise. I appreciate uour reading.
Many blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Unknown poet !
You have two votes now .
I think your wee poem is very powerful.
I love the middle phrase " God's harvest " .
A beautiful illustration bathed in a golden glow .
Outstanding piece ..I'm confident you will win
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
Ciao Unknown poet !
You have two votes now .
I think your wee poem is very powerful.
I love the middle phrase " God's harvest " .
A beautiful illustration bathed in a golden glow .
Outstanding piece ..I'm confident you will win
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for this glowing review. I loved writing this and was enchanted with the image to go with my words. Win or not, glad you liked it. Readers, such as you, keep me writing.
Many blessings
Mystery writer.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Writer,
An excellent 2-3-2 poem and entry for the contest
You've said much in this short form
and matched it to a marvelous image
Very nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
Hello Writer,
An excellent 2-3-2 poem and entry for the contest
You've said much in this short form
and matched it to a marvelous image
Very nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for these kind words and reading my work. I started to write " A Soul" but then decided to personalize it. Usually, I don't fare well in contests but that is oaky; I love to write. I was lucky to have the use of this perfect image.
many blessings,
Mystery Writer
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Just a wonderfully spiritual take on the writing prompt for today -- your words and that chosen pic make for a presentation that will be hard to top -- great job!! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
Just a wonderfully spiritual take on the writing prompt for today -- your words and that chosen pic make for a presentation that will be hard to top -- great job!! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for these kind words and reading my work. I started to write " A Soul" but then decided to personalize it. Usually, I don't fare well in contests but that is oaky; I love to write. I was lucky to have the use of this perfect image.
many blessings,
Mystery Writer