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Tribute to Our Lady of Fatima

Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Madonna of the Crucifix"
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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Donna,

Thank you for sharing your poem about the Blessed Virgin. The sighting at Fatima and the story about Saint Bernadette is close to my heart. My mother chose the name, Bernadette for her confirmation name, and I took it, too.

~patty~

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
    Dear patty, Thanks for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written fibonachi poem about the Madonna of the crucifix. Great format of the poem and a beautiful picture to complement your poem.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from seaglass
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This is a beautiful picture with a poem to watch. Both are a tribute to the Blessed Mother. Thanks for including the author notes and informing us of location.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Dear seaglass, Thank you for your comments and review. Dovemarie
Comment from kiwijenny
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This reminds me of Michelangelo's sculpture of Pieta... my favorite sculpture of all time...
That's Mary trying to embrace His Crucifix....about as close a representation of it as we can get
God bless

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Dear kiwijenny, Thank you for your comments and review. God bless you too! Dove
Comment from 24chas
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This was a good read, Dovemarie. I really enjoyed the form of this piece. The flow as good as was the ending. Nice job and keep up the good writing.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Dear 24chas, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Earl Corp
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Why if this wasn't a contest entry with restrictions wouldn't you write a longer poem on the subject? I've been told I shouldn't rate poetry and this is probably why, I don't understand the point without it being fully developed.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Dear Earl Corp, Thank you for your excellent review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A tribute to the happening in 1871 and remembered well in your few words here, forever faithful and spiritual, much enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x