Aunt Amelia's Den
A child's impression22 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
Every little girl should have an aunt Amelia. This presentation is first rate from the illustrations to the word pictures. And the little girl crushes bring back memories.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Every little girl should have an aunt Amelia. This presentation is first rate from the illustrations to the word pictures. And the little girl crushes bring back memories.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, seaglass. I appreciate your review.
Comment from robyn corum
Debbie,
Well, sweet child, you may find more man there than you can handle. *smile* Back away. Slowly. And do not go back. hahaha! This was fun, though I have no idea where it came from!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Debbie,
Well, sweet child, you may find more man there than you can handle. *smile* Back away. Slowly. And do not go back. hahaha! This was fun, though I have no idea where it came from!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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It came from that wallpaper, Robyn. I wanted to use those roses. They looked like something in my Aunt Nell's house. Then matters got ridiculous, and I kept going with it. This is not my genre, and I knew that I would not win this one anyway. Those rhyming poem entries are good. Thank you for seeing the humor in it.
Comment from Tootsie55
Great poem and I loved the picture as well. Can't remember if you have been following the trip stories in here or (Geoff)my recent Rant I did over in sankey. Good work and no spags.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Great poem and I loved the picture as well. Can't remember if you have been following the trip stories in here or (Geoff)my recent Rant I did over in sankey. Good work and no spags.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your review. I have been following your trips. I've been doing a lot of reading lately without reviewing. I will actually review one soon. I enjoy your trip stories very much.
Comment from Joy Graham
This reminds me of the Murdoch Mysteries tv show here in Canada where the young detective was raised in a brothel. Too funny when you think of it. You have good rhymes for this rhyming contest. Best wishes with it.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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This reminds me of the Murdoch Mysteries tv show here in Canada where the young detective was raised in a brothel. Too funny when you think of it. You have good rhymes for this rhyming contest. Best wishes with it.
Joy xx
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Joy. You can blame this silly thing on the wallpaper. I wanted to write a poem using those roses. Then it turned silly. I appreciate your thoughts. Hope you are doing well today.
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Comment from Miss Sherry
What a poem! Another lady writing a departure from her norm. This is so sweet and lovely, and then the end! Delightful and naughty all rolled into roses and wallpaper so beautiful I wanted to take it with me. Fortunately, I belong to Pinterest and can find it for my collection. This is delightful and I love it!!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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What a poem! Another lady writing a departure from her norm. This is so sweet and lovely, and then the end! Delightful and naughty all rolled into roses and wallpaper so beautiful I wanted to take it with me. Fortunately, I belong to Pinterest and can find it for my collection. This is delightful and I love it!!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your kind words, Sherry. It all started with that wallpaper. I wanted to use those roses in a poem, and then matters turned silly. Thank you for seeing something in the poem.
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It really is quite a good poem.
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Thank you.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Debbie, oh this is lovely and I'm so glad to read one of your lovely poems. It's fun and light and flows so nicely. Wonderful imagery and rhythm. I love the artwork to go with it. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Hi Debbie, oh this is lovely and I'm so glad to read one of your lovely poems. It's fun and light and flows so nicely. Wonderful imagery and rhythm. I love the artwork to go with it. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Ulla. It all started with that wallpaper. I wanted to use those roses in a poem. Then it turned silly. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from dovemarie
Hi, Debbie, haven't seen one of your poems for awhile. I'm glad to see one again. I think it's nice to be able to try and find a "beau" with all those business men. It's funny how a child thinks. It reminds me of Juliet in her mansion, being in your Aunt Amelia's den. Good rhyme too. Donna (Dove)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Hi, Debbie, haven't seen one of your poems for awhile. I'm glad to see one again. I think it's nice to be able to try and find a "beau" with all those business men. It's funny how a child thinks. It reminds me of Juliet in her mansion, being in your Aunt Amelia's den. Good rhyme too. Donna (Dove)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Donna. It's good to hear from you. I don't write too many of the longer poems, so you probably don't see my name often.
Thank you for your comments. I always appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh! You've told the story in such a delicate way from the innocent point of view of a child. It's good that she just sees "businessmen" and "offering plates" and beautiful roses!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Oh! You've told the story in such a delicate way from the innocent point of view of a child. It's good that she just sees "businessmen" and "offering plates" and beautiful roses!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reviewing this one, lyenochka. I don't know what came over me. I saw that red rose wallpaper and thought of it. It was a diversion for me at least.
Comment from CathyM
Oh dear, I thought a gambling parlor but an actual bordello oh my! LOL Loved the inclusion (which makes up the fun of the poem) of the rose wallpaper that every auntie has. Nice job and funny as all get out.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Oh dear, I thought a gambling parlor but an actual bordello oh my! LOL Loved the inclusion (which makes up the fun of the poem) of the rose wallpaper that every auntie has. Nice job and funny as all get out.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Cathy. You are making me feel better about my silly poem. It was the wallpaper that started my mind in that direction. I certainly appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this is a bit naughty, but in the eyes of an innocent child, all she sees is men having fun! I liked your rhymes Debbie and your cheeky sentiments, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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He he he, this is a bit naughty, but in the eyes of an innocent child, all she sees is men having fun! I liked your rhymes Debbie and your cheeky sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Dolly. I am not any good at the longer poems. Your review made me feel better about this one. Thank you for seeing the humor. I always appreciate your opinion.
