Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Great ending to this 100 word flash fiction story Maria. I wasn't expecting this superhero mum to be in a wheelchair, but, heroes come in all shapes, sizes etc. Great little story,
]cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading, Valda.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written hundred word flash fiction about our dreams of being a super hero and without realizing it we are heroes within our hearts when danger lurks we don't hesitate to rescue someone who is in danger.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

What a wonderful and inspiring story even though it is fiction. I think fiction can encourage a person. It's strange and it's a wonder what some people do with a subjects. Great stuff, Miria.

Phillip

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

reply by pbomar1115 on 22-Feb-2019

You're welcome.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Excellent little story. An impressive way to become an authentic action superhero, in the outside world as well as in a child's eyes.
Now that the hero of the story has proved she can move like lightning in a wheelchair, I think the next step should be to enter the Paralympics Games and be a superstar sports super hero!!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Wow!
You mean you're a super hero too, Maria?
I never knew that; that's soooooo cool because so am I!
What is your super heroine name?

Me? I'm SOGGY.
No, not my adult diaper--that's my hero name.
It stands for Super Old Guy Getting You. SOGGY
Ya know, it really is a small world after all, isn't it?
Good luck with your crime fighting career and the contest!

SOGGY

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Super sexy outfit.🤔
Thanks so much for reading.

reply by Dean Kuch on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks, my mother made it for me.
My pleasure, Maria.
SOGGY :)

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Absolutely awesome. I wish I could just leave it at that, because it sums it up so succinctly...but Fanstory says that that short a critique is not helpful. Ha. As if.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi Maria :)
I really enjoyed your story.
You do these short ones so well - always managing to get the whole shebang sorted in just a few words. I love how the child already sees mum/dad as a superhero - parents really are the whole world to their kids.
The ending reads nothing less than heroic.
A fab little story.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading. Take care.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Marie

- Cool approach to being a superhero.
- Good story for the contest.
- I like your artwork choice as well--goes well with the story.
- Good Luck.

Cheers, J (*<*)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading. Nice to see you around.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh, super job with this little story, Maria. Interesting and yes indeed, you are a superhero. I enjoyed reading this and much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think there's quite definitely a potential superhero in our imaginations, if not able to be be parlayed, and even more so because this dear lady did it in a wheel chair. (I've got a a 2year old grandson, he's a sweet boy) well done Maria. Blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for reading. Have a nice day.

reply by royowen on 22-Feb-2019

You too