Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Seems like this muse has used and abused his time here with you and time to boot him out the door and get a new patient one who is kind and understanding.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

advice that was needed 30 yrs ago. lol oh well, life's too short to let one person ruin the last years, right? thxs for your review

lulube

reply by country ranch writer on 23-Feb-2019

Hugs and smiles

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there,

Did your muse break up with you? Wow. I don't know what I would do if my muse left me. But, where do you go to look for a new muse? Is there an app for that?

Seriously, I do hope you find either the remnants of the muse who served you well OR a new one who will bring you a wealth of words,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

that's a yes and a no. I'm just getting fed up not being able to rely on his words or whether or not he's going to be around. I need someone to be there after day surgery this coming week and he hasn't been here for a week, and no mention if he is going to be. I may have to reschedule and ask a niece. Definitely don't like that. I don't have a swinging door for people that are broke when they come here, anymore. My care giver days are over thxs for your review.

lulube

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Lori, well is this work really aimed at your Muse? It sounded very convincingly like an end to a sad romance LOL. Whichever, you keep me guessing. Regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

a bit of both, Dorothy!! lol thxs for your review, appreciate it, always

lulube

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Lulu,

Awwww - such a sad tale you tell in your poem.

Very nicely done -- your verse flows nicely and the image you've selected complements your verse effectively.

My favorite line is the last! Dump the jerk! Ha ha ha.

Thanks for sharing,

Jan

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

love your pen name. Appreciate your comments and advice. thxs for your review

lulube

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi Lulube :)
Agree with your author notes... there's better and more deserving muses out there.
A well rhymed, flowing yet heartbreaking poem.
I hope this is from dim and distant experience not something fresh....still on your mind though...
Hugs, Debra :)

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

oh ya, been on going for long time. but the older I get the more I don't care. lol thxs for your review

lulube

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Oh Lulube... I'm sorry... that truly sucks. Been there and done that... time and time again I'm afraid. Sometimes I think I should have, "Wipe Feet Here" tattooed on my forhead. Try to find your own muse in your heart... happy or sad, stressed out or relaxed, it's always all you, whether you realize it or not... always has been and always will be! :)

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

thxs so much for your awesome and supportive comments. Not the first time but just could be the last time for anyone. I'm retiring from it all. lol

lulube

reply by susand3022 on 20-Feb-2019

Oh Lulube...I've been there too... several times in fact... lol the last time was when I met the one I'm with now. It's been almost 10 years! (I can't believe it sometimes) My first story, The Kiss was about exactly that. ;)

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

I'll try to find your story, so glad to have your support

lulube

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

In the embers we see changes and we don't like it, but there are times when we have no control over what happens to us. Your poem is filled with emotion, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

thxs Dolly for your supporting wisdom and review.

lulube