People
a 3,5,2 poem by lulube2 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
I like real people :) Nice to see you mention firm handshakes. Lots of people make that one of their tests as to whether they are worthy to know.
This poem suits your style. I like it.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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I like real people :) Nice to see you mention firm handshakes. Lots of people make that one of their tests as to whether they are worthy to know.
This poem suits your style. I like it.
Joy xx
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Ya a bit of old school, that should be used more often. A physical confirmation for who you are. Thxs for liking this style.
If it's not a recognized style, then it's probably mine; lol thxs for your review.
lulube
Comment from Alexander Noble
I found he sentmient lovely because I believe in it, but the poem doesn't quite make me believe in it. Please understand that I admire the person who believes in these things, and that I believe in these things. But the emotion cannot just be stated, it must be felt by the reader, as though they themselves are experiencing what the narrator is at that moment.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I found he sentmient lovely because I believe in it, but the poem doesn't quite make me believe in it. Please understand that I admire the person who believes in these things, and that I believe in these things. But the emotion cannot just be stated, it must be felt by the reader, as though they themselves are experiencing what the narrator is at that moment.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thxs for your honest opinions. I guess this poem is in "too simple" English for you. Sorry about that. some days I just want to put it down for the concept and forget about the imagery for the reader. thxs for your review.
lulube
