Baker's Dozen
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Whammer Jammer"Ben Baker has to hunt down and kill twelve people
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh! I hope Baker comes to his senses before he comes back. I want him to kill Conner, not Joseph. Something has to be done. I would hate to be controlled like that. Not knowing what you're doing and have someone else pulling your strings. Now to find out what one Baker will turn on. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Oh! I hope Baker comes to his senses before he comes back. I want him to kill Conner, not Joseph. Something has to be done. I would hate to be controlled like that. Not knowing what you're doing and have someone else pulling your strings. Now to find out what one Baker will turn on. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Connor has a super-tight grip here.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
I have to wonder what Connor's main priority is--to build a squad of prograsmmed assassins or to simply get his jollies off of watching Baker do things like this. Possibly both motives are equally important to him, and I'm sure the truth will be clear in the end.
Still finding the story as a whole a good read, and looking forward to the next chapter!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I have to wonder what Connor's main priority is--to build a squad of prograsmmed assassins or to simply get his jollies off of watching Baker do things like this. Possibly both motives are equally important to him, and I'm sure the truth will be clear in the end.
Still finding the story as a whole a good read, and looking forward to the next chapter!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Brenda, for staying with it. Bill
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from Earl Corp
Great installment! I like the twist that Baker is a mind zombie for Connor, I hope Joe figures out an escape. One question: what knocked Baker and Joseph out, I thought it was a shot but Joe was too far from the crate.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Great installment! I like the twist that Baker is a mind zombie for Connor, I hope Joe figures out an escape. One question: what knocked Baker and Joseph out, I thought it was a shot but Joe was too far from the crate.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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They were both shot with darts. ?Just as the lid came off, the sting of what must have been a monster mosquito pierced his shoulder. He immediately felt a rush of heat to his face as his vison blurred. Turning, he saw that Joseph had already fallen to the ground, a four-inch dart in his neck.?
Comment from nomi338
Whoa, anyone who can control the mind of another to this degree is truly a very powerful and very dangerous person. To train a person to become a skilled killer and then to program them sop that they never pose a danger to you, diabolical.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Whoa, anyone who can control the mind of another to this degree is truly a very powerful and very dangerous person. To train a person to become a skilled killer and then to program them sop that they never pose a danger to you, diabolical.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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The next chapter is the conclusion for now.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow. I guess Connor really messed with Baker's mind - hypnotized him with that music which turns him into a killing machine. Poor guy. I hope Connor's next.
" I know Gomer Pile here " (Pyle)
You have two spellings of Connor/Conner.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Wow. I guess Connor really messed with Baker's mind - hypnotized him with that music which turns him into a killing machine. Poor guy. I hope Connor's next.
" I know Gomer Pile here " (Pyle)
You have two spellings of Connor/Conner.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Oops! Can?t get anything by a Gomer Pyle fan.
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Loved his singing voice. Those old TV shows were fun as a kid but as an adult, they are rather painful to watch. ☺
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very good story. I lke the military story, it sounds like it will have a lot of action..
It was well written, and exciting. thanks for sharing, and keep on writing on!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Very good story. I lke the military story, it sounds like it will have a lot of action..
It was well written, and exciting. thanks for sharing, and keep on writing on!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Randa
Comment from Miss Sherry
Good stuff!! I don't usually care for war stories, but I like everything you write. It is sort of off the wall, but I like off the wall. If there is going to be more, I will be waiting, only I want real dogs who brave and ferocious, and wolves that tear out throats, not cower in the woods!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Good stuff!! I don't usually care for war stories, but I like everything you write. It is sort of off the wall, but I like off the wall. If there is going to be more, I will be waiting, only I want real dogs who brave and ferocious, and wolves that tear out throats, not cower in the woods!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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I had originally had dogs, but blow back about Baker killing dogs made me look for an alternative. The PA system worked right into the control of wolves and the control song for the assassin. This chapter 22, so the wolves have ripped a couple folks apart.
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Ah, the people probably deserved it!!
